19h c1 3WhatIsThis'Sleep'YouSpeakOf
What a sweet story! You've got it just right: the tone, the setting, everything. Love it!
...the firey hues of her hair and the amber flecks in his eyes... perfect.
I'm so happy I found this fic!
What a sweet story! You've got it just right: the tone, the setting, everything. Love it!
...the firey hues of her hair and the amber flecks in his eyes... perfect.
I'm so happy I found this fic!
8/22 c1 Guest
I love it. You set the scene very well, summer, picnic, poetry and of course an in denial Anne and mooning Gil!
I love it. You set the scene very well, summer, picnic, poetry and of course an in denial Anne and mooning Gil!
8/21 c1 7Nell Lime
You’ve set up for an interesting story though from the first 500 word it’s hard to follow where in their timeline they are. I’m guessing at least the summer before college, but more likely the first summer after their first year of college? Actually reading it a second time I think it is the summer between their first and second year of college. In some ways your setup makes me think of a Midsummers night’s dream for some reason. Like a disaster will hit and they’ll end up spending the night in the woods facing a bad storm maybe? You did the descriptions well, making it potent. Good job.
You’ve set up for an interesting story though from the first 500 word it’s hard to follow where in their timeline they are. I’m guessing at least the summer before college, but more likely the first summer after their first year of college? Actually reading it a second time I think it is the summer between their first and second year of college. In some ways your setup makes me think of a Midsummers night’s dream for some reason. Like a disaster will hit and they’ll end up spending the night in the woods facing a bad storm maybe? You did the descriptions well, making it potent. Good job.
8/20 c1 Hester
Lovely great to explore Anne and Gilbert’s attraction and love of one another
Lovely great to explore Anne and Gilbert’s attraction and love of one another