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8/30 c1 2spacenintendogs
this was pretty funny! i love it when ppl write sf and sw in the most ridiculous situations and they're stuck together!

can i just say i love how you wrote slippy and andrew and their interactions? rlly sweet, i like how they're obviously friends but they kinda just do what the others do for the fun rather than to the death LOL

wolf being pissy is always funny, liked how far you took fox in being a "golden boy", pigma reminded me of the dude from star wars: the clone wars in the episode where r2d2 got taken and anakin and ahsoka find a dude there and he's rlly gross and farts in their faces lol, poor leon i wanted to just pick him up and carry him away the whole time LOL, falco was amusing too, and peppy wasn't focused on too much but having eight characters to focus on is a lot, the moments he got were good too!

jesus christ... i had a feeling he grabbed the wrong flashdrive but the name of what was on it, i was not prepared LMFAO

nice job!
8/30 c1 3BobLeRigoleur
That was a nice one-shot! The interaction between characters are a lot of fun, especially Slippy and Andrew. The moment where they wonder together wether they should follow the others down the hatch or not was hilarious! The little twist at the end was a very nice touch also!

Despite the length, I read this fairly easily and quickly. You have a nice ways of writing dialogues. My only reservation is that some characters are a bit one-dimensional, like Pigma. All he has here are fart jokes.

So good job overall!

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