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9/2 c2 DerenaBatgirl
Wieder eine gute und Wyatt sind so mag diesen Chris.
9/2 c2 kalininanatay
Bianca and Renata have an interesting dynamic. They were close but now they are rivals Bianca said Renata didn't know her but the same goes for Bianca. She doesn't know why Renata is acting this way. I'd say Bianca's cousin almost cares. She hasn't said a word about Bianca's unusual behavior. Yes, Renata is competitive but she has her code of honor. I wonder if Bianca overrates the level of jealously.
What's even more interesting Bianca shared her doubts with the cousin. She could have made up some lie or kept silent. There are several explanations for her actions. She's lost and confused. She trusts Renata, or it's a plan Considering Bianca's philological state I'd say the first one is the closest to the truth.
So Bianca has feelings for Chris after all and those feelings are part of her doubts. I was wrong thinking it's not about romance. Anyway, They are both in denial and it's cute.
Melissa isn't the one I expected to see again. Henry has grown up but his desire to have fun and take from life everything while he can is a trait that won't change soon if ever changes. He knows that life is short. On the other hand, he understands it's wrong. He is at a crossroads and he needs to decide what he wants. Henry didn't give Melissa a reason to dump her boyfriend, on contrary, he is constantly trying to walk away.
As for Chris yes he is frustrated but it isn't the cause of the conflict Wyatt and Chris are having a clash of characters. Wyatt is careless and used to everything to be just solved. Whether it's maintaining order in the house or some weekly magical disaster, someone will do all the work for him. Wyatt doesn't realize that it takes time and effort. That's why he isn't doing his part. And as a said earlier living together requires some adjustment but Wyatt doesn't get it. He is fine so why bothers? Chris is neurotic. He likes everything being in order. He likes control Besides the surge of memories should have changed his perception. He had been more patient. Anyway what I want to say is their conflict isn't about a grocery or living in the same household it's deeper, and it highlights certain personal traits of the brothers

Moving out may be a good option for Chris but it's kind of runs against the main theme of the story.
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9/1 c2 Furare
I like the plot of the story so far.
So it feels like this is going to be the start of a more independent Chris, which personally I do like as a development. Especially since Bianca is going to be making more appearances in his life.

It also feels like this is Chris is slowly merging with the other chris. At least in terms of personality, I figure that experiencing some of the other chris' memories more actively might also be a possibility but that depends on how much you want to do with that. I can also understand it might take over too much, compared to what you have in mind for your own original world so to say. Since Chris seems to be becoming a bit more like the Other Chris, I am not surprised by his tactic with the demon in chapter 2. I think it was smart and insightful that he recognized the threat he couldn't beat. So go and prepare to win the next time was better than to try even harder at that point. Something one might also do in an apocalyptic future... Hmmm.

I do like a bit more insight in Henry's character, he's young and he's going to make mistakes and learn from them. There is so much potential for his character development.

Not much to say about Wyatt atm, though right now it seems that the focus of the story is more on Chris (which I am fine with, completely fine with) and then Henry. Which is fine.
8/31 c1 ann
Looks really interesting so far! Thank you.
8/31 c2 lupo95gxd
I was really happy with this flash update. It seems that the break has made you gain new energy.
Nice chapter, but I preferred the previous one. The bad guys have seen too little.
Does Bianca live in New Orleans? Interesting.
Who knows why Bianca is so into Chris ... she has met him only once and even if it may be that she keeps thinking about him and a little strange that she is softening up ... unconsciously she could feel the feelings of her counterpart on the line storm reset or Guinevere. I would prefer the latter to be the cause, I would find it more in line with the original series.
Are there no male phoenixes? I don't like species of only one genus. And the show never specified that they were all women.
Renata isn't that bad and I'm curious about this matriarch.
I didn't expect to see Melissa again, nor that she and Henry had more or less started seeing each other again. We are already at her third appearance of her, so I think that sooner or later, she will have an important role, a bit like Faye. Poor Tommy though.
Clearly for Henry it's the after-Tess, but who knows what will happen. However, it's not like the blonde saw anything supernatural.
Wyatt had the decency not to judge at least. At least he acknowledges that he was wrong while he was in the post-Dylan phase.
Cute animals enter the house.
The Chris part was the most boring. His chat with Jared was nice and the possibility of him moving is a good idea, but I didn't like his encounter with the Jackal very much. Too rushed and then the Jackal doesn't seem strong enough to force Chris to flee.
Sure in the Marvel comics, the Jackal is an enemy of Spider-Man ... curious that he has the face of someone who played Superman.
Not bad, but the last part was a bit lackluster. Anyway good work, I hope that the third chapter arrives quickly.
8/29 c1 lupo95gxd
Your new story has comforted me a little since returning from vacation. Time a couple of weeks and he recovers with the university.
Well let's talk about your fancficiton.
Excellent start. The problem is presented and the cousins who will have to solve it. As usual I will analyze the chapter piece by piece.
It was not a great surprise to see Bianca again, because I immediately understood that she would also be in the story. Very interesting is the idea of meeting part of her family. So far nothing to say.
So the Phoenicians collect souls for demons? Plausible.
What does not convince me so much is that Bianca has lost her bite after meeting Chris. Frankly, it didn't seem to me that young Halliwell had impressed her very much. However, I'm curious about the changes it will bring to the Renata series. I don't think she will play much of a role in this story, but I think in the future of the show, she could bring trouble to her cousin by opposing her relationship and exposing her to the rest of their family. Really a nice idea even if simple.
I was wondering if we would ever see Cody again. Too bad he hasn't done much, and that he doesn't practice magic as much. The of him is a beautiful power. However, getting it out of the cylinder now was a good idea. You do well to surprisingly reinsert secondary characters.
Cody appears to be a single father ... mmm ... I think we will see his character again in the future.
Chris is as neurastic as his mother and you were right to point that out. I have nothing to say about the three roommates on the scene, because it's not that important. However if I'm not mistaken Chris also took long showers.
Honestly, I live with three other people and it rarely gives me problems.
That Berit seems to be a prudent and intelligent antagonist and will offer a good challenge to the protagonists. A trio of men, it will be a nice contrast to the original series, this is also a nice idea.
I hope that we will soon have a page for the Jackal on the wiki. He seems an interesting enemy too, certainly original.
Well for now you have started well, I hope to see the continuation of the story soon.
8/29 c1 kalininanatay
oh, Bianca is finally here! The conversation between her and her cousin was very informative. A brief interaction with Chris has shaken her, but it's not about romance. I mean she isn't in love so where did that doubt come from? Is it because she saw a different way of using magic? Maybe it's something she always wanted - to be involve with it but don't use it to hurt people.
A choice between a friend and a daughter is hard. At the same time, there is nothing Cody could do to help the familiar. The demon was too strong.
Wyatt as always acts like Chris is the difficult one, while he doesn't care enough to make an effort, and adjust his behavior. Also, rules are important to make thought the hell of sharing a house.
Chris is a lot more snappy and angry this season. The memories of the alternative timeline have affected him. But sharing a house with two careless people isn't that easy. It's not the best time for Chris and Bianca to meet
The conflict between Chris and Wyatt wasn't resolved in the previous story We'll see where they end up at the end of this one.
Thanks and I hope you feeling fine and the pause was due to busyness or writer's block.

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