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9/8 c1 33Alessia Heartilly
The concept of Ultimecia using JME is intriguing, and you used it very well in this story. The idea of Edea resisting - and then waiting, when she is subdued - is so in character. And those glimpes of her life on the ship are an amazing touch. You mentioned this was a kind of last-minute idea - well, it turned out perfectly. Love it!
8/31 c1 16SilentStarlightSky
This was concise, but it had a nice lingering atmosphere. I liked when Edea clarified that the person chasing and tormenting her was Ultimecia, another sorceress. And I always enjoy a good dig at Cid. I liked the detail of her whispering behind her hand. And the part about what was included or excluded in the records was interesting too. I momentarily forgot what JME was. And there obviously must have been surviving records for Ultimecia to have ever hatched her plan. That would be interesting to read. The legendary SeeDs! (And Irvine.)

Edea didn't seem surprised to have company in her mind. She seemed so calm and strong willed. Once again, I wonder how a cool woman like her ended up with Cid. It doesn't seem fair.
8/31 c1 5Jpnh
Cool! I'm really curious about two things: 1) Ultimecia getting abbreviated to 'Mecia, and 2) is Ultimecia keeping her own notes? "JME Experiment, Phase X, Attempt X"? Makes me wonder if you have ideas about her background.

I love the reference to Seifer as "the lost child". I think of him in a very similar way.

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