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8/26 c1 21John Jude Farragut
I'll bet that's why Nina killed his wife. He must have left an unflattering review.

Seriously, though, this is one of those extremely few fics that make me smile and laugh with enjoyment. Jack's secret was delightfully unexpected and unexpectedly delightful; it completely caught me off guard, and it didn't feel like a gag.

I have two small gripes, and their names are "John Bower" and "Lena Byers." I'd think Jack and Nina, however new they may be to the art, could do better than that. (Then again, they might not...)

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