10/12 c4 9JimmyHall24
Ya can take the Sister of Battle off the battlefield but ya can't take the Battlefield out of the Sister.
Ya can take the Sister of Battle off the battlefield but ya can't take the Battlefield out of the Sister.
10/5 c4 1Ace of Hate
This is actually interesting, you should write for Black Library. In four chapters, you have gain more of my interest than some of the official writers of Warhammer books.
This is actually interesting, you should write for Black Library. In four chapters, you have gain more of my interest than some of the official writers of Warhammer books.
9/25 c3 6Toraach
I think that's close to the 13rd Black Crusade as problems with Astonomicon.
The Governor is actually a good one, he wants to protect his planet. But such a mystery at the end. Very interesting!
I think that's close to the 13rd Black Crusade as problems with Astonomicon.
The Governor is actually a good one, he wants to protect his planet. But such a mystery at the end. Very interesting!
9/23 c2 Toraach
More interesting stuff! I enjoy this. A nice description of the planet and society. Kinda fun, how different characters are under her tuleage. But at the end is a real bomb. She will get probably recruited by the Inquisition and have a lot of adventures :)
More interesting stuff! I enjoy this. A nice description of the planet and society. Kinda fun, how different characters are under her tuleage. But at the end is a real bomb. She will get probably recruited by the Inquisition and have a lot of adventures :)
9/23 c1 Toraach
Very promising first chapter. The nonmilitian orders of the Soronitas are rarely described. Accusations against her were absurd, but overall her punishment is kinda light, considering imperial standards.
Very promising first chapter. The nonmilitian orders of the Soronitas are rarely described. Accusations against her were absurd, but overall her punishment is kinda light, considering imperial standards.