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9/17 c4 4AedricDaedra
This chapter was very well written! I could feel the fear and adrenaline through Baltur as if I were there myself. The imagery and sounds were on spot too. The swaying sense of being overwhelmed, the hopelessness, the brief moment where they thought they were victorious, and then shock...
They're lucky they got out of that alive, and now I wonder where they'll go from here.
9/10 c10 MarcusHahn
Chaotic night that was.
9/9 c9 MarcusHahn
Hope they do some normal Legion fighting before they become special forces types again right off the bat.
9/8 c8 MarcusHahn
Damn.
9/7 c7 MarcusHahn
Thanks for the chapter.
9/6 c6 MarcusHahn
10/10
9/5 c5 MarcusHahn
Good chapter
9/4 c3 AedricDaedra
Interesting, this chapter took an unexpected turn of events. I can understand more of the reason behind Tarveth's silence, and it seems so do the other characters. I appreciate in particular Baltur's change in opinion of him. If Tarveth becomes friends with them after the future battles to come, it will be interesting to look back on how it started in their recruit days.
9/4 c2 AedricDaedra
Ah, Tarveth is quite relatable in some ways to me when I was in school, always the quiet kid.

I like the realism touch you've added with the complications that only having one eye would cause. I could definitely see it inhibiting siege weapon proficiency. Since Tarveth has a class in ESO, I wonder if he's that is in this story as well, or if that's one of the other paths that changed. Him watching the Arcanes in their training sessions makes me feel like he might still be, but something happened that's causing him to not use it. Curious to find out one way or the other - and that mysteriousness of his that is making the other characters theorize about him, is doing the same for me!
9/4 c4 MarcusHahn
Good chapter.
9/3 c3 MarcusHahn
Good stuff.

Writing is solid and I've been searching for a novel through the eyes of a Legionnaire in the middle of the shield wall. Excellent timing thank you.
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9/2 c1 AedricDaedra
Ah, I love it already! I'm excited to see how your main develops over the course of these chronicles, and I quite enjoy the camaraderie displayed in the others! Good to see ya writing again :)

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