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13h c20 scyfly
what is with this facination with azula? that woman reminds me of bellatrix lestrange. a psychopath who was just made wrong. truly killing her now would do the world a lot of good
13h c19 scyfly
there is a diffence between sticking to the main outline of canon and doing a playby of the episodes instead of fixing them quickly
14h c14 scyfly
this bit with bumi always baffled me, your neutral yin is really nice when your whole city is on the run and god knows how many died defending it. then those refuges went to ba sing se and put more pressure on them. yeah real great wisdom
15h c8 scyfly
your mc is a fun character though
16h c5 scyfly
yeah im not feeling your theory of beining at all. i firstly dont agree with calling it magic as that is the bending of reality not ignoring it. as for gravity? i think the awareness of it makes you a better bender sure but in such small increments it is hardly worth it.
bending comes from the spirits and chi, i dont see how changing the moon for the sun would work cause the spirits stay the same no ,atter your believes.

not a bad story but im not to fond of your plot and the details
16h c3 scyfly
his reasoning for not changing canon is such fucking bullshit. canon was a fairy tale, or do you think zuko becoming fire lord solved everything? that he pulled his forced back and they all repented, that he abolished the colonies and returned the land with the ppl singing his praises?
the world does not work like that and neither does aang own his allegiance to the world, his only duty is to keep vaatu locked away and perhaps to mediate in desputes between humans and spirits.
the water and earth nation let the fire nation do what they wanted without opposition, this is not aangs responsibility to fix.

the hate for the fire nation and the cruelty ingrained in their soldiers would not have gone away in canon. zuko himself is responsible for hundreds of deaths, none would respect him.

a far better ending wouldve been to rally water and earth then kill much of the fire nation army before installing piou yong, that sword master, as fire lord
17h c1 scyfly
he has done to much for his age, traveled to far, seen to much, learned to much. aang had a flying bision to travel the world and even with that he has done to much.

i can already tell his bending will be boring. all bending comes from chi and any worthy isekai will learn to control it instead of wasting time learning to bend the elements.
as many benders have shown body movements are not needed but they do make things easier. ergo the body movements mimic the elements and give direction, but i bet anything that half of this is personal as in there is no perfect movements just control your chi and dance to the tune of the elements.

bending water like fire...
21h c10 Michael Morningstar
I hope there is a omake of katara trying to learn the "tickle fight" move
10/24 c23 Spenge
This fic is getting funky, and not in the good way, bossman
10/20 c20 Lillian28
Love it. Please update soon
10/20 c10 Motion in the Dust
Your/Viteq's views on bending are very interesting. I enjoy how creative the waterbending gets when applying both science and other bending forms into it. It's interesting to read about.

Viteq as a character, at first I wasn't a huge fan of him. The fact that he's only 18 and is managing to do all these amazing things made me think "bland OP isekai protagonist." HOWEVER... I had to remind myself that the Gaang are younger than him and are all prodigies in their own right. So it would make sense that he could do the same. I'm still not 100% a fan of him being an isekai main character, but that's more just me being tired of seeing it in a ridiculous number of anime and fanfics as of late. It works for this story and works quite well, so I'm willing to look past my bias on that.

While I'm not a huge fan of Viteq basically deciding to stick to the main plot of Avatar and trying not to deviate from it, his reasoning behind it makes sense. Which is already better than a lot of fanfics I've seen where their main characters change absolutely nothing despite throwing off everything. And despite Viteq's resolution to adhere to the ATLA plot, I enjoy reading the more subtle changes that have already been made that will impact greatly later (Katara learning a more creative waterbending style, Yue and Sokka actually getting engaged (this makes me so happy btw), Aang's worldviews being challenged and so on). It leaves me unsure how the story will end and I love that.

Interesting story so far. I look forward to reading more!
10/18 c18 LadyVenus94
This is great! Love the interactions. Read the whole thing in one go.

Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
10/18 c18 3Gerak999
i just discovered this fic and i am really surprised isnt more popular! its awesome, and oh boy... a love triangle with toph and azula... your oc is screwed hahaha
10/17 c17 Silverbite
This is great! You interactions with all of the characters have so much life to them. I can't wait for Viteq's reveal to Azula and Toph. Things are gonna get really interesting!
10/17 c17 1k
This is amazing. If you are looking for ideas for more airbending talk, air moves from high pressure to low pressure. Kind of like the airbenders themselves. Maybe a bit on neurons? The Oc/semi si is very likeable. Please keep writing!
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