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10/20 c1 richjacobson001
Very interesting starting point. I look forward to what may come. Great job!
10/19 c1 Harakan
Like i said on FB my kind of story keep it up you got a follower on this i wonder what part you choose after initial breakout not to mention with spine Chuck who dont change his mind after her final decision but the question remain did she deserves second chance well not so fast.
10/18 c1 AwesomeCasey
Wow, this Sarah is a mess! But she has enough courage to track Chuck down in Rome. Chuck seems rather pleased to see her, but of course he has his spy duties to attend to. I’m interested to see how our favorite couple try to figure this out.
10/18 c1 Katie Langville
I'm eager to read what happens next to get to charah!
10/18 c1 Richard76310
Never liked they put her with Shaw. Casey helping her but she leaves. Does Chuck play spy and track her down. You have her out of vacation? How did that happen? This should be a very interesting story if they can ever talk to each other.
10/18 c1 4WillieGarvin
Interesting place for them to be. Sarah regrets her decisions and follows him to the mission in Rome. That may make sense for a regetful GF, but not a spy. She could have blown his cover. As a huge Charah fan, though, I'm hoping she doesn't give up quite so easily. She flew halfway around the world. At least hang around to talk to him a bit and find out what he's thinking.
10/18 c1 bfarrington56
Interesting premise. It is going to be fun to see it play out.
What we don't know is what is different from canon.
Sarah, Casey and Shaw are still in Burbank and not apparently on their way to DC. Casey is a Major not a Colonel. Did he get demoted ? Did he still meet Alex ? Did Casey kill the mole ?
We don't know at this stage. Did Sarah tell Shaw her name ?
Looking forward to your next chapter.
10/18 c1 watever63
this is great stuff i cant wait to see what happens next thanks for all the hard work writing this
10/18 c1 Surfsupbra
This was fantastic, mssupertigz. Well written for a hobbiest. LOL! Thank you for sharing this story and your talents.
10/18 c1 David E Lewis
Very nice start. I am looking forward to see where this is going.
10/18 c1 wilf21
You have set the scene very nicely and things are looking a bit hopeful. OTOH why should Chuck just roll over and capitulate at this point?
10/17 c1 1Timber63
Interest I g start, like to see where you take it. I have read different t Tara on Chuck going to Rome, but almost all have Casey or Carina with him. I like how he is truly on his own with a new team. Will Sarah ever get the courage to speak to him and tell him what she wants. Look forward to the next chapter.
10/17 c1 9nevr
Great to see you writing again. This was a difficult time for Sarah. Unlike in the show, Casey hasn’t admitted he killed the mole, so she still thinks that her Chuck is no mor3? I assume Shaw doesn’t know she killed his wife or Sarah would be dead by now. It’s not clear why any of them are still in Burbank as the reason for being there is now in Rome. Sarah has obviously decided to be with Bartowski, the spy who she still thinks killed the mole. That’s a big step, but she is too upset watching him with his mark. Does he go through with the planned seduction and sleep with the woman? Does Sarah just pack up and leave, broken? I can’t wait to read more of this.
10/17 c1 22CharmingCharles2896
Interesting start, love where you've left these two after this chapter. Now I can't wait to read more!

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