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10/26 c6 Guest
Now these are the type of teen angst season 3 should've gone with
10/11 c5 Guest
Not entirely sure what OOC means, but the way Maya acted makes sense. Especially if she thinks London's his ex. Love the way Cody and Bailey were written this chapter. Keep up the good work.
10/4 c4 Guest
I hope it's either Mosbey or Tutweiller. As I remember both at least trying to be good parental figures on the show, and London could use something like at. I'm a little angry at Bailey for abandoning London when she really needs her. But, with all this drama going on it must be bring up bad feelings from the break up, so it makes sense. I just hope London has someone to help her through this. That, and she and Zach hook up in the end. Sorry if I sound a little nitpicky there, but honestly I have no real complaints. Keep up the good work!
9/30 c3 Guest
i like this, good job
9/30 c3 Guest
nice job. It's pretty clear Cody realized London was jealous. If you need any idea for more, may I suggest...
Do to curfew they decide to take tomorrow. London walk into her cabin in a daze, like she's had the best kiss ever, which naturally Bailey notices. Zack has ruff night, which leads to him confiding in Marcus. Who's surprisingly chilled, senses he leaving the boat anyway, (I believe "Bon, Voyage," is several episodes away, but hey it's fan fiction.) At his good-by party, Marcus says something to Zach like, "Hey if somebody else, it might as be you." And London lets it slip, she kind of know for awhile. Then London gets a call and tells Zack that legally they're married.

Oh, you don't any of that? understandable, after all what do I know. You do what you like, and take whatever of mine you want. After all, fan fiction, so have fun.

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