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10/18 c9 3motroshell
I love the premises and it’s getting really interesting. I will be waiting for the update!
10/12 c9 Azkipi
Sé que no quieres leer palabras de odio hacia los personajes. Pero primero, la embarazada de la sesión era odiosa, puede que fueran las hormonas pero estaba disfrutando de herir a la pobre Hinata, y, eso es gen de maldad.
Naruto, con su actitud y con la versión de Hinata de la relación, se me hace muy difícil empatizar con él, si soy sincera no hay mucho que se desarrolle en futuros capítulos que me haga desearle algún bien, pero me ahorraré cualquier comentario malo.
Ahora amo la relación de compa?erismo de Hinata y Sasuke, hace tiempo que no leía a alguien retratar a Sasuke como una persona simple, porque lo es, no tiene la típica actitud de chico malo, mujeriego y eso hace que disfrute de él. No sé si llegarán a traspasar la barrera de la amistad en el fic, o que tan pronto será. porque Hinata tiene series problemas de autoestima y algo de depresión por lo que ha vivido, bajo esas circunstancias es difícil sacar a flote una relación amorosa.
Gracias por los capítulos, espero te encuentres bien y a salvo
10/10 c9 5BeeeTeee
Just read all the chapters and love the story so far! This pairing is definitely one of my favorites, (unfortunately for me, with this fandom). Though modern AU really isn't my thing, the plot is still angsty and cute and a fun read.

One small thing I might criticize about chapter 8, and this is more a personal opinion than anything. With the scene where Hinata burns rice on the stove, even though there aren't really true races in Naruto, it is roughly based on asian culture, so it feels weird that they wouldn't use a rice cooker in a modern setting. ;] Though I suppose they are at Sasuke's apartment, and if you're going for that bachelor feel, he might not own one.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
10/7 c9 2Srta. Perseidas
ODIO A NARUTO
realmente realmeeentee
espero que se de cuenta que la cago, y no vuelva a aparecer nunca más.
aveces solo hay que quemar puentes.
10/6 c9 Guest
i love this story so much thank u for updating
10/6 c9 Trinni
I love how protective Sasuke is over Hinata and how understanding he is of her condition.

Naruto is such a selfish prick - not hating - I am saying you did a great job with his characterisation in this fic, his character is serving its purpose...

I must say I liking the direction this is heading...I feel for Hinata having to go through all those emotions again after seeing Naruto...but lucky we have Sasuke to balance that out!

Again great job with the fic!
10/6 c9 LB Cat
Nice! I figured why I like your writing do much. It's because its not the samo samo Hinata, doormat. Yea her character is portray like that but her character does not stay like that after a hundred episode. She get up and and try, key word try, to say NO, to Naruto. The rest is just good writing. Thanks and stay safe.
10/6 c9 zisaidwut
this, I can't comment my feelings about this fiction without burning down the characters sooo it was a great read thank u author <3
10/6 c9 DAngel7
What a surprise visit and it sure shine things around! But it was much needed for the progress and development of Hinata, as well as SasuHina relationship.
10/6 c9 1Batsie97
I'm in love with this story
10/6 c9 5Nahina
I feel for her frustration in him coming back and b ing so oblivious. I really want to know why he left on his end and who he met. But thanks au!
10/6 c9 8Kurogane Tsubasa
Well, not what I expected to happen. I didn't think we'd see Naruto for at least a couple more chapters. What a dense idiot, not being aware that Hinata wanted nothing to do with him. Didn't he receive the divorce papers yet? I'm assuming he didn't because I don't think he'd be acting like this if he had. I'm not hating on him, and I know that when he saw Hinata, he was just seeing how he normally was and acting like he normally would, but come on! You leave her and then think it's a-okay to come back and make a pregnant woman make ramen for you? Just the fact that he left and hurt her should make him stay away. But again, he's a dense idiot...
Either way, I'm happy you updated and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for them! Until next time!
10/5 c9 Splaaash-attack
Ooohhh this intense! Great chapter.
10/5 c9 2zsyree
Ugh Naruto! Glad that Sasuke cut him out of his life. I'm so happy Sasuke is protecting Hina from Naruto
10/5 c9 8TallyMai
Aww Hinatasuch a good read!
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