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11/1 c8 lainielou
Ben's afraid of that mine and that scares me! I find myself holding my breath so often while reading these chapters. But I did have to laugh at Hoss's bookkeeping techniques. Poor Adam has a mess to straighten out!
10/31 c8 indiana1928
Wow...I love it. You're good with supernatural story.
I hope you will soon come with the following of your story.
Thank you very much.
10/30 c7 Adam's Gal
Oooh this is getting good. And maybe some answers to our suspicions.
10/30 c6 Adam's Gal
Though Adam has come back home and to his best friend Ross, there is a sense of foreboding in the air. Their conversation I feel could have gone a number of ways and already a warning regarding Del was issued. Why did the hands really leave? I think it’s what Adam won’t want to know
10/30 c5 Adam's Gal
The plot thickens regarding Del’s parents. Mmmm interesting and can’t wait to hear how Adam will deal with Ross. Love the interaction with Hop Sing too. Nice one.
10/30 c4 Adam's Gal
Intriguing chapter. Glad that Delphine feels she can talk to Adam and what about Ross’s infatuation with this cave? Very disturbing about her parents death too. Loving it.
10/29 c3 Adam's Gal
Good to get Del’s introduction and how she came to be with Ross. Glimpses of the supernatural too which I like. Nice one.
10/28 c8 prislynn
Your story is interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter.
10/28 c8 BJ2
Oooo ... this is turning into a Halloween story! lol... okay, you have me on the edge of my seat. Pass the popcorn, would you?
10/24 c7 Linda Weir
Can’t wait for the next chapter . Very spooky… can’t wait for another chapter thank you x
10/23 c7 indiana1928
Excellent chapter. So Ross, maybe, would be a werewolf...interesting. Adam sleeping like a baby, and maybe a monster over him, looking at him...brrrr...frightening (and I love it, lol). I can't wait to read the rest of the story.
And of course so well written, as usual.
Thank you very much.
10/22 c7 lainielou
Ross and Dell could have had such a wonderful life if Ross had not descended into madness. As for the creature...can anyone say werewolf?!
10/22 c7 BJ2
Oh Ross, what is happening to you?
10/20 c6 BJ2
Ross is already showing signs of his madness, but they’re intertwined... What is madness and what is beliefs? I’m afraid of this “bear” the hands saw that made them leave, the thing that killed Del’s parents. I almost want it to be real instead of what I’m thinking. Excellent chapter again!
10/19 c6 indiana1928
Always this magic in the air, and I love it.
Ross and Adam are well together, but we know, by a small sentence that Dell is Ross' girlfriend, and that Adam has to behave.
Your descriptions are perfect as usual.
A great chapter. Thank you.
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