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20h c1 Guest
What does ren's deck consist of?

I think that the focus of the first season standart arc should be focused on Ren concentrating primarily and establishing the deck in Pendulum / Advance / Ritual since like the rituals the advance summon deserves affection although there could be hints and some duels that show that he is already know althought if he has the other special summon in his extra deck that he himself does not consider them ace monsters since he rarely uses them until he obtains the monsters that represent the bracelet girls.
10/16 c1 Guest
Good points:

-Ren no longer suffers a problem

-enterror keep diversity of it which makes it suitable for a deck that was supposed was for entertainment (seeing the origins of Ren)

- Ritual Monster As Ace is surprising since it is unexpected but hoping to see his true power and besides being the evil version of Entermate Sky Magician does it much better and that dragons are overused like Ace Monster and I like that you come back with the protagonist with Spellcaster Ace Monster.

-We've am hoping to see how you set up the deck during the seaside advance and if Enteror Cuff Magician will have a series of Monster Support either for the Main Deck and Ritual Monster

-I hopefully go to Ren against Reiji and if they will have a rivalry or knowledge of the other because their parents were known.

-I remember that in the voting you mentioned Evil Yuzu but as that works since she would be closer to Yuya because Ren went but please do not go to the Fusion Parasite to make the Bracelet Girls fall in love with Ren since I would hate that method.

Bad points:
Since this is a hobby there is no assurance that there is another chapter if you get bored from yugioh what will only leave us with the craving and imagination of what could be a good story.

Since you have created very good stories with little chapter such as the oc counterpart of Dark Synchro dimension that was fun and had a lot of potential (although I do not know how you mix the Magic theme with the other dimensions) but only had two chapters
10/13 c1 Valkoor123113
Fan of the classics, huh?... I wonder if Joker uses Demise, King of Armageddon and Ruin, Queen of Oblivion.
10/12 c1 kurenai lui
We already know that the funeral deck will maintain its diversity, which is good

Pendulum / Ritual or there is more hidden waiting to be revealed

So Ren has person-based cards even though I always wonder how Ren got his Enterror

So arsene is his ace mosnter he will have a series of monster support like Yuga has for seven road magician that will have to be original and we will get a waifu monster as a duo for enterror cuff magician or it will be the only one and if we get enterror cuff witch (I prefer this name because to that Enterror cuff magician girl sounds very long) and if it is it will be effect monster normal or pendulum or ritual monster.

Will Ren have other Persona-based monsters?

We already know that Ren ace monster is Arsene and it is a ritual monster but who would be the co ace monster that represents the ace of the pendulum side of the deck.

Maybe a monster based on Izanagi-no-Okami that was Ren's first ace until he obtained Enterror cuff magician and made Ren able to turn him into a Enterror monster with the appearance of Izanagi-no-Okami Picaro mode
10/11 c1 Guest
I have a question:

Ritual chain (Ritual spell card): Its description specifies that the monster must have levels equal to the ritual monster or it can exceed its level since if the first one then it is very restrictive although it would be understandable because as entertainment it would be fun to see Ren always getting the necessary materials for the ritual summon that with his skills I see it very possible but if we go to the effective I hope that it can be possible materials that exceed the level of the ritual monster

About Ren:
Is He friends with Reiji and are they Rivals in terms of power?

Whose side will Ren be on in this war?
Since the most logical side for him would be the lancers because if they win reiji he can offer him the same reward that Leo could offer him if he joins and also he will not have to work with someone who also abandoned his family, he caused a war killing innocent for an unnecessary cause and brought Zarc back to life and parasiteed the brains of his daughter's counterparts and cares for no one but himself so betrayal is very likely

Will field spell card use something that was quite forgotten in arc v like the ritual monsters? Perhaps his field spell card allows him to use his opponent's monsters as materials for ritual summon

He will use strategy such as stealing monsters from the opponent, either turning them into equip spell, changing fields or other tactics such as if he faces Gongezaka, use cards that allow him to change the position of his monsters to Atk position to easily defeat him or attack. with Burning damage and multiple negate

About Reiji
Will he use all the support he has available and will we see reiji ritual summon a D / D / D Ritual monster?

Maybe turning his Link monster into a Ritual monster,

About the history
Since sometimes with very long waiting times, you lose motivation and you don't write the story again I don't know how to feel about it but at least I hope to see a duel between Ren and vs. Reiji and Ren vs. Yuya
10/9 c1 Valtryek-sama
I wonder how Ren and Yuya and Yusho's decks will differ.

There will be explanations as to why Ren / Zarc has powers to understand the monster's feelings about him and doing crazy things with them like zarc fusing them or Ren bringing him to the human world.

Ritual Ace monster is unexpected but I love it and I can't wait for the showdown between Enterror cuff magician and Odd-eyes pendulum dragon when Ren and Yuya have their duel

I also wonder if you could start making a gallery for the oc cards at the end of the chapter so that we can know its effects and have it easier to remember.

Enterror cuff magician (opinion)
The first effect is an improved version of sky magician since he only needs the cards to be on the field to increase on the field.

The other unknown effects but if we continue with sky magician as Base then its second effect could be omni negate.

Where the range of utility of Enterror cuff magician is greater than sky magician because he does not necessarily need a continuous spell card but any enterror card in the field to negate when returning it to the hand and instead of bringing another spell card he could be he banish instead or inflict effect damage

A third effect would be something that would be useful against zarc would be that he could steal it since supreme king zarc is not protected from ritual monster.

Since Ren is a fan of the classics then he will use card as a field spell since I think only sergey used it in his duel against Jack.

We will see the evolution of the ritual summon either by card or monster as support that allow:

Use the opponent's monsters as materials for ritual summon (even the xyz monster)

Ritual summon a monster that is in the graveyard or banished zone

Ritual Summon on opponent's turn.

I'm interested in the deck that Ren has to see other original things like that Ren has enterror versions of some of the monsters used by Yuya in the manga.
Entermate Ballad
Entermate Barracuda
Entermate Corn
Entermate Uni
Entermate clay breaker
EnterMate Turntrooper
Entermate Kuriborder
Entermate Card Gardna
Enter-Mate Mer Maid
Enter-Mate Rolling Sambaa

Other ideas for Enterror monster from entermate that Yuya never used or just because they are useful.

Entermate Heavenly Magician
Entermate Sleight Hand Magician
Entermate Lizardraw

I also wonder if we have reference to entermages since ren's ritual monster is a spellcaster

Performage Damage Juggler
Performage Hat Tricker
Performage Magic Tactician
Performage Mirror Conductor

Since there is not much about Yusho I look forward to the oc carss to make his deck stand out

Although I hope Ren plays with pure enterror archetype and has no need for monsters other than enterror

Reference for enterror monster based on an anime that I liked For the extra deck

Based on Rimuru (Demon lord when he went the walpurgis but with a black mask like specter bakugan) the slime protagonist of his anime.

Planned as a fusion monster

Millis Nava (Battle mode form) character from the rimuru anime (Synchro monster)

Ranga as a dark version of Yuya's wolf (xyz monster or pendulum monster)
10/8 c1 Makotoxvalerie
Sorry, I use a translator and I forgot where to correct so sorry for the mistakes
10/8 c1 roxtarsgalaxy
First of all; Ace Monster Ritual ... YES !
Sorry, ritual monsters are one of my favorite types of monsters.

Second; thanks for uploading this story again, I really appreciate it

The idea of an Enterro deck, a dark and distorted version of the Entermate / Performapal, seemed like a great idea to me and I don't think I've seen it in any other fanfic.

I like that Ren doesn't seem to have the same problems that he had in the first version of this story.

As a suggestion: make a list of your OC cards at the end, it helps to have a clear idea of which card does what.

As a curiosity, will you make a monster D / D / D ritual?

I already see Ren using a Pendulo / Ritual monster in a major game (like against Yuya or Reiji) and showing them what the Pendulo can accomplish. They are not limited to only normal and effect monsters, but can include the Xyz, Synchros and Fusion monsters.

With the boy who disappeared ... I would like to see what Yuya and Yoko will do when they see him come back, or if they think he was dead, get mad at him or something.

Ren has an appearance related to someone? Some character from an anime / video game

Thanks for the chapter, Ciao ~
10/8 c1 makotoxvalerie
I have to say that I like this more than the original

I like the enterror deck and it was a good surprise that the ace on the deck was a ritual monster which makes it interesting

I like ren's personality and how he doesn't seem to suffer from a problem like in the original version

Things I suggest:
Make a gallery of oc cards to make it easier to remember the effects

That serena is already in stadart and meet ren (as for example that ren and reiji went to fusion dimension and serena's bracelet teleported him back to standart the three of them together)

Rin with a similar background to the one in the fic where the oc reincarnates as a sawatari

Things I hope you change

That ren does not steal the school even if you do the duel between ren and yuya that ren despises the school saying that it has no value besides that reiji is already creating pendulum cards by analyzing his funeral deck

Please don't break Yuto's characters like you did in the original version

Oc card:
Ren will have a funeral that represents his mother (Yoko and her Road raven deck) and about the monster that represents his bracelet girl, he could have the one that already represents Yuzu on his deck

Ren: Overscale pendulum sumon, Hybrid pendulum / ritual monster

Yuya: Ritual monster and intengrate summon

Reiji: Ritual monster and Transcendent Pendulum Summon
10/8 c1 Guest
A ritual monster like Ace that is interesting and we still keep the surprise of all its effect but it seems that it is much stronger than its entermate sky magician version although I hope that 3 effect because it is more credible as ace and the ritualsmonster are more difficult to summon . Since your first two effects must be upgraded versions of sky magician So the third effect should be used to remove annoying monster Maybe you could give it a steal effect like borreload dragon Since I honestly see Ren as someone who could use tactics like stealing the opponent's ace monster and using it to deliver the final blow.
10/8 c1 Neo Infinity
Thanks for the great chapter glad you finally updated the first chapter, hopefully this story will catch up soon.
10/8 c1 CAD270895
Which character appearance can be associated with Sakaki Ren?
10/7 c1 Mufalan
I gotta say, i like this better than the old one
10/7 c1 helios darkus
I love the rewrite so far I like how Ren seems like he won't join the academy since it's stupid to join someone who left his family like Yusho did.

Also reiji is a good neutral ground since he can offer the same rewards to Ren when they win the dimensional battle.

Ilove how the Deck is strong without the need for a pendulum even though its true nature is Pendulum / Ritual

I love the Enterror cuff magician and can't wait for his series of monster and cards like (aprentice, witch, sage) similar to how Yugi has support for dark magician and Yuga a seven road magician

Although a little disappointed that we could not see the effects of Enterror Cuff magician I hope it is something op because the ritual monsters are more difficult to summoned so it has to be quite broken to be the ace monster (which I hope it has similarities to entermate sky magician and enterror scar-eyes which I hope does not exist since ren's ace is spellcaster)

Although suggestion:
Enterror form approach based on the entermate that Yuya used in the manga and that he has not used in the anime

strategies of Ren versus action duel such as meta style (such as infinite negated, HandTrap) and prevent the opponent from draw except in his draw phase

Will Ren extra deck consisting of only the monsters based on the bracelet girl and their evolutions or there will be more monsters to give him more opportunity to shine in the future

Monster based on the girls and reiji

"Enterror Savage Dancer"
Attribute: Dark Type: [Beast-Warrior / Fusion / Effect] ATK 2400 DEF 2000 Level: 7
"Enterror Beast-Warrior" more 1 "Enterror" monster
Cannot be destroyed by battle.
Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1: You can Tribute 1 other "Enterror" monster and for the rest of this turn this card can attack all monsters your opponent controls and what is not destroyed at the end of the battle phase are banished.
If this Fusion Summoned card you control is sent to your graveyard by an opponent card effect: You can add 1 Spell from your Deck to your hand.


"Enterror Frozen Bell"
Attribute: Dark Type: [Spellcaster / Synchro / Effect] ATK 2400 DEF 2000 Level: 7
1 tuner monster more 1 or more non tuner enterror monsters
Once per turn during any player's turn: When your opponent normal or special Summons a monster (s): Negate and banish it and inflict damage equal to the atk or def of the banished monster (s) (whichever is higher) .
When this card is destroyed by battle or card effect and sent to the Graveyard, while you control no monsters, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard in face-up on the field

Attribute: Dark Type: [Winged -Beast / xyz / Effect] ATK 2400 DEF 2000 Rank: 4
2 or more enterror monster from level 4
Once per turn: You can detach 1 material from this card; can attack, up to the number of "Enterror" monsters you control but battle damage is halved.
If this card in your possession is sent to your graveyard by an opponent card: You can target 1 "Enterror" monster in your graveyard or in your pendulum zone and add it to your hand.

"Enterror Prodigy Prima"
Attribute: Dark Type: [Fairy / Effect] ATK 2600 DEF 2000 Level: 8
When this card is normal or special: You can Special Summon 1 "Enterror" monster from your pendulum zone or face up on the extra deck. You cannot Special Summon other monsters the turn you activate this effect, except for Enterror monsters.
Once per turn: You can pay 1000 Life point and all face-up monsters you currently control gain 300 ATK for each monster your opponent controls until the end of this turn.

"Enterror Royal Demon"
Attribute: Dark Type: [Fiend / Effect] ATK 2600 DEF 2400 Level: 8
If this card is Advance Summoned using a "Enterror" Pendulum Monster as Material (At least 1): Destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls. Then, inflict 100 damage to your opponent x the total original Levels of the monsters destroyed by this effect.
Look:Royal Demon's Death Doom

Uni Enterror:
Attribute: Dark Type: [Beast-Warrior / Effect] ATK 800 DEF 1500 Level: 4
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Enterror" monster from your deck in Attack Position. During your opponent turn: You can banish this card from your Graveyard; the next time you would take battle damage or effect damage this turn, you do not (this is a Quick Effect).

For its appearance, think of the card Entermate Uni but with a dark blue dress

Enterror Corn:
Attribute: Dark Type: [Beast-Warrior / Effect] ATK 600 DEF 1000 Level: 3
Once per turn, during your Main Phase: You can target 1 other "Enterror" monster you control with 1500 or less ATK; change both it and this card, that you control, from face-up Attack Position to Defense Position, and if you do, add 1 Level 7 or higher "Enterror" monster from your Deck to your hand. During your opponent's turn: You can banish his card from your Graveyard; inflict 500 damage (this is a Quick Effect).
For its appearance think of the card Entermate Corn with crimson dress.

PLEASE NO ENTERROR SCAR EYES IN THiS STORY and use other dragons if you are going to use ren's enterror deck but not the focus.

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