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2h c1 169RockSunner
Vigilantes with super-powers don't let themselves be arrested. They just escape.
5h c4 197KagamiPINKAgreste
Okay yeah, hitting 7,000 words is a HUGE surprise. Still a well deserved one. Damn, Zoe not for bullied but because her father committed suicide is harsher. It definitely would have been better for canon wise material.

Many hate Zoe (I'm NOT one if them), yeah sadly a plot device, agree to disagree on the Mary Sue thing. Yet the writers have Zoe better then Cholé or Audrey. I mean Cholé is likely to end up just like their mother. Same with Lila (Lovely antagonist), definitely needs exploring as to why she's such a good liar. Cholé small lived redemption, (still NEVER a character I enjoyed) the writers made her worse then her Season 1 self.

5th chapter featuring Kagami Tsurugi, I'M ALL FOR THAT! Why re-visit Marinette?! As for what to do, maybe alternate of "Lies" - Season 4. I mean Adrigami truly understanding one another.

ON TO MY REVIEW: Cholé and Audrey's lackluster conversation felt real. The characterization together was placed well. Audrey mistakenly calling Zoe "Zoology" can't deny that was funny. Poor Sabrina inside that no light whatsoever closet. A pair of fully gold heels from ADRIEN! Even as a birthday present, oh purrlease Bourigous.

Much better Sabrina able to meet the REAL Zoé. Damn giving Sabrina's non-existent mother a backstory great. Zoe dealing with all of Cholé's outbursts seriously should talk to Adrien herself directly. Great Zoé is in Ms Mendeleiev's class. I actually like her as character more then Ms. Bustier.

Now going by YOUR order of introduction of Miraculous Students:

Marc Anciel: Sweet cute shy boy. LOVED HIS AKUMATIZED FORM: REVERSER! Need more of this boy. I like Marc/Nathaniel just NOT a huge fangirl of them romantically.

Aurore Beureal: Adorable physically, nice somewhat. A bit of Cholé at first glance with too much arrogance. STORMY WEATHER WAS FUN!

Mireille Caquet: I SO NEED MORE OF HER! I have this fan obsession her and Kagami (my favorite Miraculous blunette) are sisters! I'd love to see Mireille true personality and akumatizion. She should have a Miraculous herself.

Alya Cesaire: Good God enough already! HATE her more then I do Cholé and Marinette. Enabling Mari's sick twisted Adrien obsessed behavior. Lady WiFi was great, always enjoy watching her. TAKING AWAY MORE SCREENTIME FROM CATTASTIC KITTY CAT NOIR! Rena Rouge isn't that damn important!

Nino Lahiffe: ADRIEN'S FUN LOVING BROTHER! A great but less intellectual guy. Him and Alya are okay romantically, but he could do so much better for himself. (I ship him and Marinette too) The Bubbler okay creepy looking but still an amazing akuma. Carapace NEEDS more screen time.

Rose Lavillant: A true defintion of sweetheart. I love her sisterhood with Juleka. (I romantically ship Rose MORE with Prince Ali, but do enjoy Juleka and her together) Princess Fragrance is very fun.

Juleka Couffaine: LOVE, LOVE HER CHARACTER! Reflecta beyond akuma greatness! Her red eyes are my weakness. (I low-key ship her and Marc romantically) PURPLE TIGRESS NEEDS MORE SCREENTIME, SO LOVE THAT SUPER!

Mylene Haprele: A deeply caring girl with way too many fears. Her and Ivan romantically are adorable. Horrificator that was crazy fun. I can't be scared of a PINK monster!-Love the Daddy/Daughter bond she has with Fred; The Mime LOVE HIS AKUMATIZION!

Ivan Bruel: Boy deserves more screen time. A gentle giant when one gets close. Stoneheart the beginning of it all damn NEED him back! He and Mylène romantically so adorable.

Alix Kubdel: SECOND SPITFIRE AFTER KAGAMI! Girl speaks the truth and is a great character over all. Bunnyx so LOVE seeing her! Can't wait for younger Alix to first become her!

Max Kante: Intellectual love that. Gamer is amazing, that akuma shows I'm always smiling.

Le Chien Kim: BLEED TO DEATH! YES, I LOATHE HIM! Yet he gets a bit likable because I romantically ship him with Alix. She's the only one able to keep him in line.

Lila Rossi: Favorite antagonist! Her torture of Marinette is my LOVE! I SHIP her and Nathaniel romantically!

Nathaniel Kurtzberg: So LOVE The Evillustrator! The character development on his boy is shocking but great. More characters NEED his changes.

Mr Armand D'Argencourt teaching basketball, not surprised. He is very enthusiastic about his sport of fencing. Sadly he's not shown much as the school's gym teacher even tho he is. Beautiful shot Cholé, Lila milking the attention. The class's reactions to Lila hurt are GOLD! Each characterization I could see it perfectly.

Cholé's bullying isn't excused. The girl can't treat people like they don't matter. As for cutting herself, Zoé good save, no life should be taken like that. Now the sisterly heart to heart and flashbacks are well written. The emotion placed in them was good. Damn Zoé's father committing suicide terrible scene but we'll done writing.
10/15 c3 KagamiPINKAgreste
Read all 3 chapters. Seriously, you had me at 'Marinette Failure'. I LOATHE her as character, let alone the beloved main protagonist. She's NOT the only, there are TWO protagonists yet many disregard Adrien Agreste/Cattastic Kitty Cat Noir.

Clumsinette/Ladybrat isn't all that. The writers truly screw up her characterization at nearly every turn. It's NEVER cute, decent nor romantic. Good God, Reflekdoll - Season 3 was the very tip of a cold iceberg of her horrible behavior towards Noir when she's disgustingly obsessed with his Agreste side.

Saw in your summary, Plagg/Tikki so love them romantically. It's always so interesting and cute. As for Chapter 1: 'He didn't mind her making fun of his bad jokes (bad in her opinion), or rolling her eyes at him, or occasionally bossing him around.' - This sums up the long series in a nutshell.

'why did the girl who had been mistreating him as of late have to be the same girl who was stalking him?' - Life weird like that. All the guards I hope Gorilla wasn't fired or better made head of that detail.

Damn chapter 2, Fu seriously blames Adrien?! *Faints* Yet I'm not truly surprised by that either. Plagg/Tikki married moments so cute, Plagg means well Sugarcube. Naming Adrien, Guardian at this point, is form of punishment. Even with Wayzz explaining its NOT enough. I did like Regina Cimex (it works then Ladybrat) saying - 'You're not going anywhere now, you crazy parasite,' - That's definitely fun. The akuma's power I never read about, it's very interesting.

Your possible chapter 4 is about Bourgeois and Zoe sweet. Looking forward to that. Maybe a chapter about Kagami would be Miraculous. Oh thank you for Story Following my 'Stubborn Monkey' Miraculous ongoing work. Oh actually if you have time, check out my Miraculous one-shot: 'Same Pain, Different Demons'.

ON TO MY REVIEW: Well at least Marianne Lenoir will be with Fu. Not the he deserves her to be AFTER EVERYTHING HE PUT ADRIEN THROUGH! Faking amnesia?! That's just horribly wrong! Hehe, Plagg pillock, really? What are you Rupert Giles? *Giggles* Still Adrien that was mean.
Alya hating Marinette has nothing to do with the fact she committed the crime. (Yeah, I LOATHE her myself) Still doesn't make it okay for her to stalk the poor boy. THANK YOU ALIX KUBDEL! Of course she's creepy. Sweet Rose no it's not. She's NOT Adrien's girlfriend nor wife so to know his whole schedule, every single detail ISN'T healthy.

Adrien actually got a smile from Ms. Mendeleiev Cattastic. Well of course he'd beaten his brother at the game, he's the 3rd best gamer at the school. Awww, Gorilla allowed music in the car nice. Wayzz told Gabriel EVERYTHING?! What the hell, Longg, Pollen, or any of their brothers/sisters should have stopped him. Well anyhow at least Kitty got told Nino is Carapace. The Blog had a true field day, Alya you and many misunderstood so much. Gabriel's last words were of remorse figures. Only then did he finally wake up to the evil he had. Gorilla being guardian of Adrien YAY!

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