9/23 c29 PhoenixFlare62
So far I'm really hooked on this story but isn't Tartarus's air poison?
But please keep on writing!
So far I'm really hooked on this story but isn't Tartarus's air poison?
But please keep on writing!
5/11 c3 Guest
I have a neighbor named Teresa
I have a neighbor named Teresa
2/22 c30 Guest
I need more please
I need more please
11/18/2019 c29 Guest
Please update this story! I'm really enjoying it and I'm sad that it hasn't been updated in 4 months.
Please update this story! I'm really enjoying it and I'm sad that it hasn't been updated in 4 months.
5/6/2019 c14 Matt
Okay, sorry about that. Here's some constructive criticism. Next time you decide to make a story maybe you should put it down on paper first and read it to friends or have a friend beta it so they'll help you out if the see any errors or majorly confusing plot holes. Avengers: Endgame has a few even though it's fantastic. I mean in it, it seems like both M.L.B and garbage collection has been put on pause. M.L.B I get but why would people just become major slobs? Also stuff like where/when Loki is?, where's Gamora? and how does Spider-Man: F.F.H. address the five year jump? So confusing.
Okay, sorry about that. Here's some constructive criticism. Next time you decide to make a story maybe you should put it down on paper first and read it to friends or have a friend beta it so they'll help you out if the see any errors or majorly confusing plot holes. Avengers: Endgame has a few even though it's fantastic. I mean in it, it seems like both M.L.B and garbage collection has been put on pause. M.L.B I get but why would people just become major slobs? Also stuff like where/when Loki is?, where's Gamora? and how does Spider-Man: F.F.H. address the five year jump? So confusing.
5/1/2019 c6 Guest
Oh my gods, that Greek can't been from Google translate, they made actual sense.
Oh my gods, that Greek can't been from Google translate, they made actual sense.
4/23/2019 c22 Bean89
At the start of the chapter you said they were falling, but after that you said they were already on the ground?
At the start of the chapter you said they were falling, but after that you said they were already on the ground?