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12/29/2020 c1 Guest
Hi! If you want to make this as historically accurate as possible, I suggest changing the corset thingy. Indeed, a corset would not make a lady faint, and tight lacing was not a thing, even more in this period (if we're in 1920 ish). Corsets were largely falling out of fashion since WWI, and even before that they were strictly comfortable garments that provided support and structure to the bust. Trust me, I know from experience, I wear a circa 1895 reproduction corset on a regular basis for full days. I can develop more on the topic if you want, otherwise I advise you to watch videos on corsets made by youtubers Bernadette Banner, Karolina ebrowska, or Miranda Milner's "Corsets versus feminism" (she's a feminist, don't worry...).
Therefore, I would advise you to change Anya's fainting so it is caused by anxiety, sickness or mostly anything other than a tightly laced corset. Or if you really want to keep this plot point in, please, for the sake of not spreading false information, do put a warning that the corset thingy is not historically accurate...
Hope I helped you, this story is really good so far!
7/11/2019 c6 58MusicAngel98
I love this! I can't wait for your next update!
5/27/2019 c5 MusicAngel98
This was so cute! I love that the two are happy now! Please continue!
4/21/2019 c4 92Dr. Ribeiro
Hope he manage to find her again!
Great job and happy Easter
3/12/2019 c2 58MusicAngel98
Love this scene so much! I am here for the cheese! Please update soon! I absolutely love this story!
3/7/2019 c1 1thewritermagician
Wow! This is so great, I’m so fascinated and on the edge of my seat for more! I love your writing style here for so many different reasons! I saw your review on my story so I thought I might pop by and leave you a review and I’m so glad I did because I’m like, invested now in this fic! Keep up the good work 3
3/3/2019 c1 58MusicAngel98
Please continue this! The concept is so interesting and I love the chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
2/26/2019 c1 Guest
I like this story I hope you write more.
2/26/2019 c1 92Dr. Ribeiro
Oh, poor Anya,
Anastasia was a great movie.
Congrats, cant wait for more.

Ps. May I ask, can you help me with my story?

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