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12/20 c26 Wolftattoo
Wow, Harley is pissed at Vinnie for leaving she wasn't so pissed when she saw him again when they rescued her wonder what Vinnie's words will be when he sees Harley again. He already experienced Modo's anger hopefully things will get better once he sees his niece for the first time.
12/18 c26 Styx
Thanks for the chapter.
I wonder - i know what harley went through. Did she ever get the same Support / help / understanding as Vinnie gets now? Does she have a family around like him. I can understand her in a way. Hey, it's Vinnie. He can Do whatever he wants and still is a hero. Yeah. We are all broken.
And what about modo?
About Kiwi - Vinnie was the one - the hero that saved her. Now it is Zevvi. Why does she need another one to stand tall?
12/18 c26 3SpaceFlora
Yes an update! Whoop!
I like it how realistic these characters are... so life-like! They're complicated, like real people are, life's complicated.
Yes, what will Zevvi think of Vinnie? I'm hoping the meeting goes great but I'm aware of your love of drama, so we'll see xD
And can I just add, this sequeal along with the first story... this is a massive saga you're building here! Very impressive!
Keep up the great work!
12/18 c26 12Youkai55
Harley is beyond pissed at Vinnie. Wouldn’t be shocked if she hits him, nice and hard with a wrench. He deserves it for the crap he pulled.
Zevvi will probably run and hide from him, crying her eyes out. He did abandon her, after all.
The next chapter is going to be an emotional rollercoaster.
11/21 c8 Styx
So. After reading "breaking the habit" (i read every day so it took me a few days) i'm here.
I'm at chapter 8, so i don't know what will follow. But i wanna thank you that Kiwi and Vinnie won't get a Baby.
Sometimes i have this 'twilight' picture in my head. The Vampire and the fragile human girl. Getting married, having a Baby... Ugh.
So i'm glad that you decided otherwise (Well i'll See). The whole happy family stuff - lets save this for modo.

I'm still following your storys. Please don't ever stop.
I really hope that you'll fight your depression and will find out how beautiful the real life (on Planet earth) can be.
Greetings from germany
10/28 c25 3SpaceFlora
Hell yeah! Wow, that was good... Really loved this chapter! Those interactions between the characters were so great! Phew, whatta rollercoaster in deed, I think I chewed my nails short while reading this...
Keep up the excellent work!
10/28 c25 Palacegirl
Throttle does have a point vinnie sucks at talking, he can barely say a few sentences. I just remember I wonder what will happen if harley finds out, she is going to be super piss at kiwi for letting vinnie back to her arms. I am so addicted to this story, I can't wait for vinnie to meet zevvi. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
10/28 c25 12Youkai55
What an emotional rollercoaster! Kiwi thinks he left her again, Modo’s madder than hell, Throttle’s trying to get him to open up, and he did! Of course Modo would never hurt Kiwi. But he did ask if she slept with him. That did cross the lines, which she called him out on.
Then, there is the White hot mess himself. He’s changed. Hopefully for the better. It’s shown in the last few sentences. He wants to see his niece. That is going to be one reunion no one will ever forget.
8/20 c24 Palacegirl
I hope your okay. It's been a while, I'm still with this story. Stay safe :)
7/7 c24 Youkai55
Friggin awesome!
You know how to bring on the drama!
Throttle better put a ring on Carbine before someone else snatches her up.
7/7 c24 3SpaceFlora
I cannot even write how much I LOVED this latest chapter...! And yes, you sure can write some serious drama! That fight between Modo and Vinnie... Oh my gods! It got me trembling with anticipation...! and the scene just escalated and escalated and oh man I really thought, this is it man, our big fella's gonna shoot Vinnie..! And finally... things cooled down, even a bit... to be continued I suppouse...? Oh man... that was a wild ride!
7/6 c24 Palacegirl
Finally, I've been going nuts to read what was going to happen in the reunion. You were right, there sure was a lot of drama alright. Damn, modo almost lost it for a moment. One thing for sure he's never going to forgive vinnie for leaving and hurting kiwi. I'm glad kiwi didn't let her guard down, because vinnie is not going to be off the hook that easy. He still has a lot of making up to do. I'm surprise throttle didn't kick vinnie's ass, because he was hurt too. I'm glad the macho mouse is back, it didn't feel the same without him. I can't wait when he meets zevvi. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Stay safe :)
7/6 c24 wolftattoo
Ohh, things were intense Modo almost let his dark side win had he killed Vinnie then he would've been the next bro to leave Kiwi would never have forgiven him. She just got Vinnie back only to lose him again but thankfully Modo's conscious took over he is glad Vinnie's back but he's really pissed right now. At least Throttle is more forgiving he's angry too but he's willing to give Vinnie a benefit of a doubt & speaking of which Vinnie should tell his bros that Kiwi isn't the only reason why he left. His restlessness caused Stoker's death which led to the freedom fighters losing their most beloved leader which pushed Throttle into that position, His brash behavior leading to Throttle being further scarred, lost Modo another limb, losing Carbine her uncle he felt like such a fuck up he had to leave. Now he has a chance to fix things especially since he has a niece that he has yet to meet.
6/30 c23 Palacegirl
I wasn’t to sure if I wanted to put this in the comments or not. Anyway there’s this song that sort of reminds me of what Vinnie was trying to apologize kiwi for the mistake he did. The song’s in Spanish, I’m not sure if your a fan of those type of music. It’s from this show called “Corazon indomable” and the song is called “Perdoname” sung by Camilo Blanes. I hope you like it. Looking forward of the next chapter :)
6/23 c23 21MegK1978
About f-ing time that mouse got his head on straight! At least enough to return. Interesting in seeing how Zivvi will fit into the new/old dynamic of Kiwi and her macho mouse.
Brava!
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