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12/14/2020 c1 Guest
WOW! That was such an amazing read! I literally almost threw my phone up in the air when I saw that you updated! I high key want to see Vanellope and Taffyta make up some how, I completely agree with Candlehead here, she by far has the most sense out of all the racers. Also I just loved how you wrote her, she’s just the sweetest little thing!

You did such a great job! Also please don’t feel unmotivated! Your stories are sooooo AMAZING! And I can’t wait another four months for an update lol!
12/14/2020 c13 CraSyMario
The year is almost over and nothing good happened when...

"A wild new chaper apears!"

This is amazing.
12/13/2020 c13 11TU4QU0I53T4IAN6L3
Oh crap. Things are not looking good for everyone. Now that Vannelope is going out of the game, it is probably the Sugar Rush racers who would be in danger of the next update. And Flint is helping out Yesss for something; I wonder if this is going to impact the Slaughter Race game.
10/24/2020 c12 Guest
Hope to see the next chapter soon!
8/4/2020 c1 Guest
Damn! It’s almost as if Vanellope and Taffyta switched roles here, with Vanellope being the stuck up arrogant snob, like when she says “A winner is what I’m coded to be.” She’s getting a little cocky here.

But don’t get me wrong, it’s perfectly fine to tweak a character a bit to give the story an interesting spin.

And as usual EXCELLENT job!
8/2/2020 c12 guilty
I was rubbing my hands together before reading this. "Ohhhhh shit's gonna go down."

I wish I could say I was surprised by Vanellope doing what she did. But since the last movie's she's becoming more and more unpredictable, and maybe was always so. Is Shank going to regret letting her live in Slaughter Race? Even a game as wild as that has rules and an honor system to uphold. Ralph's not going to be happy either. He's not going to be proud of this "victory." Vanellope's let everyone down.

Well done, as usual.
7/15/2020 c2 24the pixlexic sloth
Loved how Van called her car in Slaughter Race "Licketly Spilt". Perfect touch
7/14/2020 c1 the pixlexic sloth
Ooh, me like! lol What a different and interesting idea- the racers coming to stay in Slaughter Race. I smell conflict lol Taffya is definitely in character here. Also, I agree- I font think the racers ever got along with Van either
Great work on this first chapter :P
6/8/2020 c11 Guest
(Guilty-As-Battery-Charged)

Damn, what a heavy chapter. Where to start?

The scene with Flint and Double Dan at the beginning was excellent. It's basically two colleagues who can't stand each other but tolerate each other to get a job done. Though I imagine with Double Dan, it's always like that, no matter who the second party is.

The scenes with Ralph were brutal. Wanting to get his memory reset completely is basically "Fight or flight" kicking in. He can't deal with his emotions and therefore he thinks the solution is to stop having them. He needs something new in his life, a new friend or a new hobby, because Vanellope's too caught up in her drama in Slaughter Race to be there for her best friend.

The scene with Taffyta redoing the castle was brutal too. Basically Ralph and Vanellope's entire history in Sugar Rush, and everything they accomplished together, wiped out by a change in government, and Taffyta being such an empathy-empty snot. Poor Ralph.

Brilliantly done on this chapter.
6/2/2020 c11 6ColdSpike2475
I feel like a few scene in this chapter had far more telling. I can sort of understand that if someone is drunk, that makes sense, but there are more believable ways to do some of this dialogue.
I still enjoyed it though. As for grammar mistakes or missing words, I would try Grammarly. It helps you learn a lot.
5/20/2020 c1 Guest
Wow, this would be a really good third Wreck It Ralph movie if they ever make a third movie. Awesome job!
5/20/2020 c11 56Animation Adventures
Oh, Flint... what are you up to? And what does Yesss want with you?

Wow, go Candles! She finally spoke up on her own! At least now Shank and the others can go knock some sense into Vanellope and Taffyta for settling their feud on an unfinished course.

I like that Ralph pointed out to Felix and Calhoun that their kids aren't angels, considering all the drama they started when they moved into Slaughter Race. And it really seems implausible that Felix and Calhoun could realistically get the kids to behave so properly in the time Ralph and Vanellope were in the Internet.

Poor Ralph... he crushed one of his last few mementos of Vanellope living in the arcade. Hopefully Felix can repair it. Like him, I love that kart. I also wish that Vanellope could've taken it to Slaughter Race with her.

Great work!
5/13/2020 c10 Guest
It will be interesting to see how this race goes, Taffyta has 15 years of experience on Venellope, and Taffyta has also been racing without the advantage of a glitch. I think without being able to glitch it’s going to be very hard for her. Can’t wait to see what happens!
5/11/2020 c10 6ColdSpike2475
Oh dear...
5/11/2020 c3 ColdSpike2475
So we got to see things from Taffyta's point of view and things make a bit more sense, but I still feel maybe it was a tad on the nose. Granted, it does seem like everyone else is portrayed a tad more subtle. So it's Taffyta and Vanellope who are on the extreme here.
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