7/13 c4 25Swift Bolt99
Mexico does not exist in Strangereal. You could've used Sapin or Lesath for the Hispanic food reference.
When the gloves finally come off between General Resources and everyone else, It looks like Clown is going to be the main bad guy. It's really going to be something for Trigger to face off against his former boss.
Nice work.
Mexico does not exist in Strangereal. You could've used Sapin or Lesath for the Hispanic food reference.
When the gloves finally come off between General Resources and everyone else, It looks like Clown is going to be the main bad guy. It's really going to be something for Trigger to face off against his former boss.
Nice work.
7/12 c4 QuantumCry
Hey, glad to see another chapter! Damn, Clown's really gone off the deep end. I like how you characterised all of Golem as well as Sky Keeper as Harling evangelists, was pretty funny in a disturbing way. That and how Brownie's and Knocker's deaths were parallels. GR really are the dark side, given references smattered throughout, which were a nice touch as well. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Hey, glad to see another chapter! Damn, Clown's really gone off the deep end. I like how you characterised all of Golem as well as Sky Keeper as Harling evangelists, was pretty funny in a disturbing way. That and how Brownie's and Knocker's deaths were parallels. GR really are the dark side, given references smattered throughout, which were a nice touch as well. Looking forward to your next chapter!
6/14 c3 Zancudo Fiend
I'm shocked this story isn't getting more eyes upon it. I can't wait to see what's next and I have a good feeling as to who the former Osean Pilot is
I'm shocked this story isn't getting more eyes upon it. I can't wait to see what's next and I have a good feeling as to who the former Osean Pilot is
6/9 c3 4Republic of Anea
First, it's "Fort Grays", not "Grace". Second, your "if you will"s are getting annoying. Try something like "pretty much" or "remember". Third, pretty appropriate that Air Erusea is that airline company EASA marged with, thanks! Fourth, how TF did Bartlett of all people get that seat if he was branded a spy, even with that 2020 Document reveal? Was he cleared of all charges? Fifth, who could that Osean drunkard pilot be, PJ? Palmer? Bristow? Can't be the first, since he's mincemeat by that laser.
BTW, thought you'd be interested in doing Project Wingman-related stuff (maybe even implement a thing or two here). Here are some pointers :)
reddit r / Project_Wingman / comments / kg63ar / just_played_through_conquest_mode_and_here_is_the
projectwingman . fandom . com (which I almost singlehandedly built myself)
First, it's "Fort Grays", not "Grace". Second, your "if you will"s are getting annoying. Try something like "pretty much" or "remember". Third, pretty appropriate that Air Erusea is that airline company EASA marged with, thanks! Fourth, how TF did Bartlett of all people get that seat if he was branded a spy, even with that 2020 Document reveal? Was he cleared of all charges? Fifth, who could that Osean drunkard pilot be, PJ? Palmer? Bristow? Can't be the first, since he's mincemeat by that laser.
BTW, thought you'd be interested in doing Project Wingman-related stuff (maybe even implement a thing or two here). Here are some pointers :)
reddit r / Project_Wingman / comments / kg63ar / just_played_through_conquest_mode_and_here_is_the
projectwingman . fandom . com (which I almost singlehandedly built myself)
6/6 c3 QuantumCry
I found this story while browsing the Ace Combat section, it must be one of the few that actually utilizes Ace Combat's rich lore and its world. I'm not too familiar with AC3 (Played only 4,5 & 0) but the way you have set the stage for it is intriguing, I could see this being a sequel to AC7. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this fic.
I found this story while browsing the Ace Combat section, it must be one of the few that actually utilizes Ace Combat's rich lore and its world. I'm not too familiar with AC3 (Played only 4,5 & 0) but the way you have set the stage for it is intriguing, I could see this being a sequel to AC7. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this fic.
3/17/2019 c1 34lixiaofossil
Once again she makes a deal with Satan, and she doesn't know what it will cost her.
Once again she makes a deal with Satan, and she doesn't know what it will cost her.
3/15/2019 c1 Spare 15 Thanos Trigger
uh...nice AC Advance nod there but the ASF was stated by the wiki to have been formed in the 2030s. Also, is Rita Fry made up like that Heiwa country? Isn't the ADF-11F just called the "Raven"? And why is the Leasath - Aurelia war not even referenced (even if it's supposed to start 6 months from the timeframe)?
uh...nice AC Advance nod there but the ASF was stated by the wiki to have been formed in the 2030s. Also, is Rita Fry made up like that Heiwa country? Isn't the ADF-11F just called the "Raven"? And why is the Leasath - Aurelia war not even referenced (even if it's supposed to start 6 months from the timeframe)?