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4/14 c4 10AlchemyWriter
Yes! New chapter, or at least a preview of one!
2/27/2020 c3 22StellarStylus
That was one heck of a battle scene! (And nice touch with the "bubblegum" quote, too.)

Splice seems like a real tough guy, but he needs some kind of weakness to counterbalance all this strength and skill which he has. Just a thought...
2/27/2020 c2 StellarStylus
I like how you manage to retread familiar ground but make it feel all so new, as if we're only just seeing these things for the first time. Splice isn't just a lesser knock-off of Neo, but he's got his own potential and destiny as well.

Nice touch of humor, with how Splice finds Trinity attractive before it's all cleared up that she's already with Neo.
2/27/2020 c1 StellarStylus
First of all, I think you did a really good job here, in that it feels like it could work with Matrix canon. I can easily see this happening, given what we know of the lore.

Being (at least somewhat) hack-proof against Agents is a new thing I haven't seen before.

You also write fight scenes very, very well.

(One question: How does a fourteen-year-old boy get his hands on all those kinds of weapons? Or am I missing something here?)

Keep up the great work!

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