2/23/2020 c8 2bk201fan
So nice to see a new OMG fanfic written so recently. I really came to like this story, to the point I couldn't stop reading till the end. Great pace, good story, new characters and Aoshima getting punished. Can't really ask for more, unless it's more chapters. Hope the author has more OMG stories coming.
So nice to see a new OMG fanfic written so recently. I really came to like this story, to the point I couldn't stop reading till the end. Great pace, good story, new characters and Aoshima getting punished. Can't really ask for more, unless it's more chapters. Hope the author has more OMG stories coming.
11/5/2019 c8 6Imaginos1892
Yes, this story is complete. Belldandy, Keiichi and Skuld are back to normal, and I just don't have anything left to say.
I do have a few ideas for a story about Urd's revenge on Mara, but nothing on how to MAKE them into a story.
Urd analyzes mini-Mara, brews up a potion and breaks into Mara's lair
Urd gives Mara a ferocious beatdown and force-feeds her the potion
The potion regresses Mara to a ten-year-old child and seals all her powers
Child-Mara gets picked up by Social Services, they're alarmed by her strange behavior
Mara winds up in a mental hospital, stuck as a powerless child
Urd gets drunk to celebrate and forgets to secure the jar
Mini-Mara knocks it over from the inside, rolls it off the workbench onto a sake bottle, breaking both
Freed, she returns to Mara's lair, organizes the rat minions to rescue Mara
She's still Mara, the minions are still rats, they try, and fail, repeatedly
Some of the patients see them, a few try to help, but…they're nuts, and it never ends well
Some of the staff see them too, and wonder if working in the nuthouse is driving *them* batty
There are endless possibilities for zany antics and wacky humor, but the story is just not in my head. If somebody else wants to tackle it, feel free. I'm getting back to my other stories.
Yes, this story is complete. Belldandy, Keiichi and Skuld are back to normal, and I just don't have anything left to say.
I do have a few ideas for a story about Urd's revenge on Mara, but nothing on how to MAKE them into a story.
Urd analyzes mini-Mara, brews up a potion and breaks into Mara's lair
Urd gives Mara a ferocious beatdown and force-feeds her the potion
The potion regresses Mara to a ten-year-old child and seals all her powers
Child-Mara gets picked up by Social Services, they're alarmed by her strange behavior
Mara winds up in a mental hospital, stuck as a powerless child
Urd gets drunk to celebrate and forgets to secure the jar
Mini-Mara knocks it over from the inside, rolls it off the workbench onto a sake bottle, breaking both
Freed, she returns to Mara's lair, organizes the rat minions to rescue Mara
She's still Mara, the minions are still rats, they try, and fail, repeatedly
Some of the patients see them, a few try to help, but…they're nuts, and it never ends well
Some of the staff see them too, and wonder if working in the nuthouse is driving *them* batty
There are endless possibilities for zany antics and wacky humor, but the story is just not in my head. If somebody else wants to tackle it, feel free. I'm getting back to my other stories.