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12h c14 4GloriousMagicDeathSpit
OHHH
16h c8 GloriousMagicDeathSpit
What's DevinArt
20h c23 Imhorribleatnames
IT'S BACK! Now to reread the last few chapters to remind me of some stuff.
22h c1 NoName
Great. There is nothing more to say.
12/25 c23 5Arcantos the Storyteller
Well, this is a delightful Christmas present! And a delightful lesson on Psychology which I never thought of before, I'll have to keep that in mind going forwards to sure.

Still, love this chapter. Seeing Fanthom addressing Mola, Darkstalker ardently defending his friend, and Clearsight stepping up and overruling Darkstalker when necessary... fantastic, utterly fantastic.

Still, this meeting... oh I dread it. I dread it so, so deeply, and I am so, so afraid that things might go wrong.
6/29 c22 3Solomon7
Okay, nevermind, Darkstalker is going to kill again.
6/29 c22 10Blackberry Avar
I'm just watching this story in the background, waiting for the end to come, because it was always obvious that it would. You've improved in dialogue these past few chapters, and the story is consistent enough to where I don't stop and ask questions, thinking, 'wait, wasn't he set up to do that instead of this in the last chapter'?

Clearsight's explanation about being able to see what'll happen to her works within this story, as it explains her difficulties with Fathom and Indigo, but it conflicts with her reputation as the greatest seer in quite a long time. Maybe the rest were all trash. At any rate, it also conflicts with Clearsight's Book in the third arc, which I am okay with, although I'd just like to bring that up.
6/25 c22 DragonMasterLoki
Oh no. Darkstalker. Things are taking a turn for the worst again this is how it started last time! With someone close to him getting hurt/taken away, and him using magic for the war! Am I the only one who sees history repeating itself?...
6/25 c22 5Arcantos the Storyteller
Oh. Ooooooh. I see, I see. So Clearsight can’t see Solstice being kidnapped, because she wasn’t there herself. The future she sees is her future, are events that Clearsight herself witnesses with her own eyes and ears. If she never goes on the trip with Darkstalker, then she never learns that her son is kidnapped... and, to be honest. If she had gone on that trip, then Solstice would never have been kidnapped in the first place

And Fathom... Fathom would never let Solstice die. He is too caring, too loving, too compassionate to let his best friend lose his son... so Clearsight will never see her son dying, as Fathom would always prevent... but that means, that if Fathom can use his magic... if Fathom can use his power without being corrupt... then Darkstalker can as well... and even that is very, very dangerous because Darkstalker does not have the same personality as Fathom does.

I really, really hope that Clearsight can keep him from going down a talk path... Clearsight and Fathom both...
6/25 c22 110 J Q K A
NO! BAD DARKSTALKER! *uses spray bottle*
6/24 c22 Imhorribleatnames
As I've been saying for the past 4 chapters, the Seawings are doomed. But now it actually tells us that.
6/23 c21 3Solomon7
"You're a good dragon, Fathom. That's never going to change."

Why am I getting serious Obi-Wan and Anakin vibes from this? And why do I think Fathom is Anakin in this metaphor?
5/31 c21 LegoFiend12
Question: does Solstice and Remedy have any powers like their dads mind reading or animus or their mom’s future sight?
5/22 c21 5Arcantos the Storyteller
Damn... that was dark.

That's twice now that Clearsight hasn't seen something when it comes to the SeaWings, which is curious... are her powers limited somehow? Is there a restriction when it comes to the SeaWings that she doesn't know about? Are there paths she's subconciously been avoiding when it came to them?

Is her fear of Darkstalker the King still holding her back? Or is there something else?
5/22 c21 Imhorribleatnames
Darkstalker is definitely PISSED. I can't imagine him not using his magic for the war anymore, and what Fathom just did is probably gonna shock a few dragons (him using magic and the fact that the spell LITERALLY resurrected someone). Poor Clearsight, her life isn't going to get any easier.
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