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4/13/2020 c3 24DogDrawler
This was interesting. I wasn’t expecting them to go all out on Victor and violate him like that. It really shows their cruelty. Plus I can see even more Infinity War parallels. Victor is like the Hulk warning that Thanos is coming.
2/3/2020 c17 Maxwolf
Wait is Humphrey dead?! Great chapter I’m curious to see where this leads to next.
2/2/2020 c17 The Return of the Enclave
That was amazing war but Humphrey and so many will not return home sadly. At least they stop the horde and Ragnos and his plans. I meet read it again as it was really good. Anyway have a good day and tell next time.
12/7/2019 c2 DogDrawler
I’m starting to notice the biggest strength is the dialogue. While not perfect, it shows a lot of character and it feels natural for the most part. The descriptive words could use some work.

—DogDrawler
12/7/2019 c1 DogDrawler
This has potential. Although this kind of story is very similar to Gamora and Thanos, it’s still interesting. I’m particularly interested in how the little pup develops under his care. Maybe their personalities will rub off on each other. The only thing I’m concerned about is the supernatural element. It wouldn’t be so bad if you didn’t refer the setting as “Jasper Park” in Canada. It’s a modern setting, and it’s called a park because humans (with their laws and technology that have no place with the supernatural) encloses it that way. If you just called it Jasper, it would’ve been perfect. Also, the tense is inconsistent which makes for a bit awkward read. Nonetheless, I’m interested! Good job!

—DogDrawler
11/24/2019 c16 5Twigyzz
Ur writing is underrated, I really want to be as good as you one day
11/23/2019 c16 The Return of the Enclave
Good job looks like the United pack is getting closer their enemy.
10/20/2019 c14 Twigyzz
0-0 oh no...
10/20/2019 c14 The Return of the Enclave
Good job on the story. Humphrey had a good time with his family besides having that nightmare. Anyway looks like Humphrey is ready to fight against the horde. I can’t wait to see how wins the war. So have a good day and tell next time.
10/10/2019 c13 The Return of the Enclave
Good job man keep up the good work. I can’t wait to see the war. Still it’s sad Victor died but at least he died with friends. As Humphrey spending time with his family as it meet his last. Well you have a good day tell next time.
10/5/2019 c12 Twigyzz
U inspired me to start stories. You truly are a great writer my friend. Keep it up great chapter
9/26/2019 c12 The Return of the Enclave
Hmmm that’s a hard one the United pack has numbers but the Horde has stronger wolves. Even there leader is pretty powerful enemy. Yet the United pack has something to fight for. Their land, families and freedom as the horde is fighting for power. So it’s going to get pretty good on the war. Anyway have a good day or night tell next time.
6/6/2019 c7 The Return of the Enclave
This story is getting better and better man. Keep up the good work. Anyway have a good day or night tell next time.
5/8/2019 c1 Guest
nice
4/28/2019 c5 The Return of the Enclave
Good job man the story is amazing. I can’t wait to see what happens next. So have a good day tell next time.
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