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7/31 c19 swingerofbirches90
Another excellent chapter!
5/30 c17 Guest
Oh, this is good! Your work is angsty but hopefully this will have a happy ending :)
4/29 c17 LJ
Interesting. I wonder how Meg is going to behave with these other patients potentially influencing her in the future. I have a feeling Erik may not end up liking that others could have a more immediate influence on her than he does, since he can't be there monitoring her behaviour.

At least she's sort of making friends. I wonder if this place will still end up being as bad as her nightmares. Some of the staff's behaviour is already shady AF.

Looking forward to the next one!
4/22 c17 swingerofbirches90
Oh, goodness. It’s hard to imagine Meg staying at Kirkbride for the duration of her pregnancy. I’m glad to see she’s already made friends, at least. You did a great job of describing the atmosphere of Kirkbride; I was able to easily pick up on how uneasy Meg is feeling right now.
4/21 c16 LJ
I have sooo many thoughts but I don't think this site will allow me to write an entire essay :)

The main thing I want to say is that I always leave this story wanting to know more (in the best way - this is how writing should be done). You always tell just the right amount without saying too much. I so look forward to your updates and they never disappoint.

There was a lot to think about with this chapter. Your versions of the characters are so detailed and well-drawn that they actually feel realer to me than the originals by now. Your writing is absolutely on point here!

I love the little hints that Erik is feeling guiltier than he will let himself admit. He is definitely the type to struggle with admitting he might have made any sort of mistake.

The detail about Meg's memory issues is interesting. Definitely sounds like dissociation. It's interesting because I seem to remember a bit in the second fic where she had all but forgotten about Erik beating her. I had wondered even back then whether something like that might be going on. Nice foreshadowing!

Interesting that Erik's paying off the staff to find out what Meg tells them. I feel like Erik's gonna find out some things that he won't be particularly happy about, to say the least.

Sorry it's been a while since I've written a longer review. These are crazy times we're living in and haven't had a lot of energy or focus. But I am still here as your loyal reader.

I like the way Erik is so quick to defend Meg now. Their relationship has certainly evolved quite a lot since the first fic.

Anyway, as always, looking forward to reading more!

P.S. I ended up buying the kindle editions of your two books! Looking forward to a third!
4/21 c15 LJ
I still can't get over that Meg is pregnant with Erik's child and that Christine's child is not his. I so did not see that coming. It's such an interesting twist on Love Never Dies.

I hope Lucy helps make things better for Meg.

Meg's memory flashbacks are interesting, and, of course, horrible. I had suspected there were other horrifying memories she had been suppressing. I feel bad for all the awful things she had to witness as a child.
4/4 c16 swingerofbirches90
Two updates in one weekend is better than any present the Easter Bunny could have brought me. This chapter was long, too! I’m not surprised that Erik wants to know every private detail of Meg’s treatment...maybe this will be the way he finds out about everything Meg did to make their lives easier when they first came to America. I like that you haven’t made them instantly fall in love with each other just because of their circumstances...you’ve kept it much more realistic, that way. Great chapter!
4/4 c1 Sherwest
Your occasional update on your story really makes me happy. Thank you great chapter as always. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
4/3 c15 swingerofbirches90
Great chapter. I think you do a good job of explaining Meg’s thoughts during this difficult time.
3/21 c14 LJ
I have so many feelings about this. I don't even know where to begin! Poor Meg! What's gonna happen to her, I wonder?
3/4 c14 4guiltypleasureffnet
I don't know what to sayI'm blown away
3/4 c14 swingerofbirches90
Ahh, my prediction was right! I know it’s early days, but Erik still reacted better than I expected. He’s probably in shock. I hope Meg will finally get the help she needs.
3/3 c1 lefantomedevientpop
I adore this story. I read the two previous books and was wondering if this one will be published as a book as well.
2/25 c13 LJ
Oh, my! I feel awful for Meg! That's certainly worrying! Way to leave us hanging! I'm hooked on every word, and can only hope that you update asap. I feel so sad for her and have to remind myself that she's fictional. A testament to your writing.
2/24 c13 swingerofbirches90
Wow, such good chapters.
Several things- I did not expect to see that turn of events with Mrs. Merriweather. I hope she doesn’t try to tell everyone about Meg’s past. It’s easy to see that Meg is starting to buckle under the pressure of everything she has been through.
Erik’s comment to Meg about her knowing her limitations...I feel like he’s never going to treat Meg with the respect she deserves.
I have a prediction for Meg’s future based on some hints I think you dropped, but I don’t want to be too specific and potentially spoil anything for other people reading reviews if I’m right.
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