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19h c24 Guest 2020
I'm grateful to the author for valiantly continuing despite the ungodly mess created by Tobey's impulsive wish. From this reader"s perspective, however, it only heightens the entertainment value of an already marvellous story. Thank you so much for your hard work and for donating your talent to this site.
P.S. Tomorrow, I will be Guest 2021. Happy New Year!
10/3/2020 c23 1KiraReaper
So good! I wonder what happens next!
5/21/2020 c23 Guest
Oh it's so good!
5/15/2020 c23 Guest
you’ve done so well! I wished you had continue the story this is so far one of the best sarah x jareth canon fanfic i read so far i wish you made more chapters
4/27/2020 c23 2titanicdragon
Please update
3/23/2020 c3 Guest
Awww please make more chapterrrs
3/16/2020 c23 18mae-E
this is interesting.

funny of all the other tings going on that was the one thing her father was worried about.

how will toby's run interfere with Sarah's approval hearing go?

and if toby wins and thy go home, how will this affect her relationship with her family? and if toby loses what can Sarah do to keep them from being changed by the place?

either way things with her family will never be the same. whether this is for the better or the worse is yet to be seen
3/15/2020 c23 Guest 2020
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I appreciate your update. Thanks.
2/19/2020 c22 Guest 2020
Jareth has his Queen! Complete with captive in-laws! The Babe's words outed the truth with irrevocable results. Robert's instinctive suspicions were proved to be sound. Now the new Queen is crying, the little brother in law the only hope for the family's return to the above. All those smooth plans totally blown. Awkward, indeed! Thanks for the quick update. Loved it!
2/19/2020 c22 mae-E
so the plot thickens. sarah might not be able to help directly, but could she send her friends to help him in her stead? just how different will the labyrinth be will be altered from her brother's prospective and interests?
2/16/2020 c21 mae-E
oh this should be interesting. being the said person he bound to do so, and yet this could damage any chance of the new relationship with Sarah flourishing if not destroy it completely. does this mean that toby has to run the labyrinth? how will this affect Sarah and whatever power she has? if her brother wins does it go to him? and if he loses she loses her family. something she would never forgive him for.
2/15/2020 c21 Guest 2020
The hazards of dating or being the Goblin King. How stunningly awkward and serious things can get in a heartbeat. My oh my! You did this so well, from smooth sailing meet the family to a truly epic 'Oh sh...' moment. I rarely ask an author for a quick update, but please, would you? Thanks.
1/30/2020 c20 mae-E
cool chapter. so what risk if after inspection they find her lacking and unworthy?
1/28/2020 c2 Guest 2020
Looks like Tobey might get to revisit the Underground. The complications of explaining this magical place, and it's inhabitants, to the child would be substantial. Would he be expected to keep the visit as a secret from his parents? It would be interesting to see how Sarah, Jareth and Tobey would handle such an event, should it transpire.
Nothing like a lot of intense scrutiny of a budding relationship to enhance romance. Jareth's kingly role presents some unique challenges. Hope Sarah can keep her cool.
Thanks for the update.
1/21/2020 c19 Guest
Loved it. Just reread entire story. Please update soon.
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