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12/31/2020 c7 Andrea
Words cannot describe how happy I was to see you updated this story! Love where its going so far, I also hope you are staying safe and are healthy and well rested at the best of times!
12/28/2020 c7 7MyuSona
Seeing chapter 7, after such a long time brought a smile to my lips. Then proceeded to reread the story and fall back into the world of watership down.

I really appreciate your research and further deepening the world lore, seeing how someone from our prospective would grow and change in this strange and bizarre situation, giving meaning to the human characters alongside the normal cast of rabbits and animals. I look forward to future chapters to sink my brain into, to see more on why the black rabbit had given her his "fur." and what her role is with this group of rabbits (beside the budding romance.)

To be honest, reading this makes me want to sit down and read the book (something I have never truly got to do.) I adore the original animated movie and series growing up, fell in love with the bbc/Netflix version and this story brings me back to being a kid, bringing back into the world I adored and still deeply love. I have been lurking on this story for awhile now and I hope you know that we love your unique take. Keep up the good work, happy holidays and a new year. I hope you and your love ones are well and safe.
12/26/2020 c7 20Gotham317
Happy Holidays to you as well!

I love the little moments Angela shares with the rabbits on her journey, especially with Bigwig. I look forward to seeing more after this.
12/24/2020 c7 Gemini's Revenge
Amazing Chapter! I can’t wait to see how relationships will grow and change as the story progresses.
12/24/2020 c7 rycorop
Angela is so cute! I like her interactions with the others (especially with Bigwig haha). Everyone's in character and that's really impressive! I hope you're safe and doing well.
12/23/2020 c7 Flameis
Thanks for the chapter!
12/23/2020 c7 3RonaldM40196867
Nice job, Bigwig.
10/22/2020 c6 Guest
Bruh wtf you got me shipping rabbits?! I only found this fic though an author I like's fav stories and was like "huh watership down human turned rabbit fic, why the hell not?" And I didn't expect to be FEELING things. God I hope you update soon bc I'm extremely invested now. Angela x Bigwig forever lmaooo fuckin rabbit shipping. It's cute! You write so beautifully too so I appreciate that too. All I have is praise but an inability to vocalise/write it properly lol. I'm legit here getting super worked up and excited reading this xD
7/4/2020 c6 6Chipster-roo
My apologies for the excessive procrastination.

This was a great chapter. The interactions between Bigwig and Angela are spot on; Bigwig stays in-character and there are several cute moments. The plan, involving the gypsies getting stuck in the snares, was brilliant, and the scene where Angela has to lead Bob back home was very intense.

Really looking forward to more!
6/13/2020 c6 James d
You should pick up the pace. This is a good story! I keep wanting to here what happens next!
6/7/2020 c6 6Warrior of Spectra
Original chapters, like these, I enjoy. Chapters where the OC interacts with the world, rather than merely being present as an observer who makes a few comments as the events of canon pass them by, help make stories like this brilliant. Angela, with Bigwig present in order to help not only with her scheme but as a character fans recognize, once again had time to shine and develop as a character. Despite being a rabbit for a short time so far, it’s good to see her using cunning and blending her knowledge as a human into how she survives in this new world she has to live in.

I couldn’t help but chuckle at Bigwig’s questions, and Angela’s attempts to answer. How exactly does a human go about telling an animal about the things we do? Economics, mathematics, philosophy etc.?

And Angela going full “rabbit squeal” was a good touch...for such small animals, rabbits have VERY powerful lunges.

As for Angela and Bigwig, all I will say: I am curious as to what will happen. But for now, we just sit and observe.

As always: You’ve done a very good job. Keep up the amazing work.
6/5/2020 c5 Warrior of Spectra
The way you blended your story and that of what happened in Watership Down was dons perfectly! What was happening in the area of Cowslip’s Warren was implied, but never seen. You managed to give the humans in this area a face, allowing you to progress the main story and Angela’s plot.

As for Angela’s words directly to Cowslip, I enjoyed the fact that there is a difference between Angela’s foresight and Fiver’s visions, where as the latter sees imagery of what is to happen, while Angela recounts what will happen to individuals.

Bigwig realizing Angela was telling the truth wasn’t abrupt, as it occurred at the right moment and Angela was doing things to save his life no other rabbit had even heard of.

The end of the chapter was also executed well. Instead of just continuing with the plot you continued Angela’s sub plot and even brought Bigwig along for the ride. Looking forward to reading Angela’s revenge!
6/4/2020 c4 Warrior of Spectra
This chapter pleasantly surprised me at all turns. Rather than just being a retelling of events from the limited series, with Angela along for the ride, you managed to incorporate elements of Angela’s story in an interesting way to keep the reader’s engaged.

Cowslip’s paranoia about Angela drew my interest at the right moment, making me curious why she would be treated with even a small amount of hostility. Then Strawberry’s explanation made perfect sense. This leading into Angela contemplating why she is here, as a rabbit, was a good read. She doesn’t know what she needs to do, but this realization is a start.

And, of course, the conclusion. This is a perfect way to blend the original story and Angela’s plot.
6/3/2020 c3 Warrior of Spectra
So this review is long since overdue, I am very sorry for delaying it.

But having at least watched the Netflix series, I have a better time visualizing the story now. Both Angela and Bigwig’s perspectives were well done. It was good to show how Angela is learning about lupine and the stories of rabbits. Through Angela’s experiences, you are helping readers who are new to the mythos in the Watership Down story. Angela having to adjust to this new reality of her’s is also well done, as she has only been a rabbit for a short time. Angela’s encounter with the crows serving as an excellent wake up call that this is no dream.

Bigwig’s perspective was well placed and written, as if gave reader’s the chance to see the perspective of a rabbit who is familiar with the world where as Angela needs to adjust. You show that he is the fiercest of the group, but in his own way he wants what’s best for the others.

Looking forward to reading more! Keep up the amazing work!
5/30/2020 c6 20Gotham317
I am so glad to see the next chapter. I was very relieved Bob was freed and the gypsies got what they deserved. Especially Bigwig and Angela in a compromised position when in hiding, so adorable:)

I look forward to see more when Strawberry joins the group, passing Nuthanger farm where Hazel falls for Clover at first sight, their arrival at the Down and an exhausted Holly finding them.
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