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2/16 c20 Kuwpp
A wonderful story. I wanted to see more of John and Margaret's relationship towards the end, but it was still a good read. Thank you for your time. I look forward to reading more from you.
2/16 c7 Kuwpp
I'm loving this story!
1/8 c20 100recycled
That's a really nice story and I like the style you wrote it very much. Henry's story is extremely sad and heartbraking too here - and devastatingly realistic in that aera, I fear. Very good idea of you, to take the story that way.
The only thing, I'm wondering about is, if Henry, for the way he died, would have been burried on a "normal" cementary. I'm not sure that would have been possible at the time - but maybe it was. I hope it was.
10/26/2020 c20 21Jayne DLM
Really enjoyable story! Well done.
10/25/2020 c20 mariantoinette1
Such a sweet story. Thank you.
10/23/2020 c20 Windyandstormy
Thank you
10/23/2020 c20 69Daniella Harwood
I wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story once again, it was a really interesting twist on the original and you caught the characters and atmosphere so well.

your vampire twist intrigues me. I have become obsessed with A Discovery of Witches lately. I don't know if you've seen it, but it has a vampire as the hero and it is quite different from the usual vampire habits, as well as twlight, although I have never watched or read that series, as I was put off by what little I did see of it whenever trailers happened to be on. Anyway I thoroughly reccomend the tv series and guide to the novels, though not the novels themselves as they were a bit of mess in my opinion. I'm glad I saw the tv show first otherwise I would have been completely put off.

I look forward to your next N&S piece.
10/23/2020 c20 MrsSP9
Twin boys Yeah!
So glad everything worked out for John and Margaret after so much heartache, they deserved their happy ever after. Now with twin boys to look after things will never be the same, and they have a bright future ahead.

A great twist on a classic tale, thanks for sharing it with us.
8/21/2020 c19 Kss
Loved your story but still waiting for the epilogue.
7/15/2020 c19 Kss
Loved it! But I vote you write another North and South book.
7/12/2020 c19 sari18
This is beautiful. Thank you for updating this love story. Keep a good work at nursing placement. Stay safe.
7/11/2020 c19 MrsSP9
What a nice almost ending. Glad we have the potential for Thornton and Margaret to have a happy ever after, with the blessing of Mrs Thornton, as well as the mill being saved. Roll on the Epilogue
7/11/2020 c19 Windyandstormy
Thank you for writing this story
7/11/2020 c19 mariantoinette1
So lovely ending. Wonderful writing.
7/11/2020 c19 Carolineonestop
Such a good story
Thankyou for sharing your work with us
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