11/24/2019 c2 13C'sMelody
I would feel a tad more sorry for Nat weren't I laughing so hard. But seriously, poor Nat. I suppose karma has a funny way of handling things. And Bart, bless him, is being a bit too oblivious given what's just happened, but I suppose he wouldn't *dream* of Nat being in love with him, no matter if he's trying so hard to make it up to the spirits. Also love the addition of Piper to the usual trio. She has a lot of potential as a character and not enough stories seem to feature her.
I'm only sad you seem to have stopped updating this story! I would love to see how Bart finally understood it and Nat coming clean and to terms with his feelings. Maybe someday. :)
I would feel a tad more sorry for Nat weren't I laughing so hard. But seriously, poor Nat. I suppose karma has a funny way of handling things. And Bart, bless him, is being a bit too oblivious given what's just happened, but I suppose he wouldn't *dream* of Nat being in love with him, no matter if he's trying so hard to make it up to the spirits. Also love the addition of Piper to the usual trio. She has a lot of potential as a character and not enough stories seem to feature her.
I'm only sad you seem to have stopped updating this story! I would love to see how Bart finally understood it and Nat coming clean and to terms with his feelings. Maybe someday. :)