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1/15/2019 c1 10Rehabilitated Sith
Hahah somehow I could imagine this in the show and the red face Keith would have afterwards if he remembered
7/6/2018 c1 7Althea Sirius
Well, this was sweet.
4/21/2018 c1 ToMuchImagination
Omg I loved that! That was such a neat story!
4/6/2018 c1 12Phoenixrin
wow.
just... it felt like I was reading an official work than a fanfic. too good, man
3/7/2018 c1 Guest
I like the dynamic here. Poor Keith! It was so cute to see Allura comfort him.

I really enjoy your writing style, and the narrative itself. Quality content
3/1/2018 c1 Guest
Awwwwwwwwwwww! That was so sweet and cute and I loved it! I just melted throughout the whole thing!
2/1/2018 c1 83FunkyWashingMachine
kjdsflkjdsgjkl Galra catnip ;D
This is a great scene, it plays really well with the character dynamics! I don't see a lot of stuff that focuses on Allura, either, thanks for writing about her! I definitely laughed about the earth earrings, too ;)
1/29/2018 c1 6Adrianna Agray
Fantastic writing: ) their team dynamic was perfect: ) readers tend to learn more about Keith when he’s sick...but this is the first fix I’ve read with Allura as the caretaker: )
1/29/2018 c1 65IcyPanther
Aww, that was so cute! You really nailed Allura and Lance's characters and I loved their dynamic. Allura asking about the specifics on how to rub someone's back had me laughing out loud. She's just so out of her comfort zone but she really does step up and figure it out as she goes along. Lance's commentary too (Awww! ; now you're getting it) just made me grin and smile and I love how while Allura comforted Keith, Lance in his way comforted Allura.
Thank you for sharing!
1/28/2018 c1 Lala Norisu
Aww lance & allura date together that so cute

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