5/27 c13 Guest
If you’re going to spend a long time between updates for one story, considering these horrendously short chapter lengths you really should combine the chapters into one full story. Also, for goodness sake, proofread the story so that it’s grammatically correct and therefore easier to read and follow along with!
If you’re going to spend a long time between updates for one story, considering these horrendously short chapter lengths you really should combine the chapters into one full story. Also, for goodness sake, proofread the story so that it’s grammatically correct and therefore easier to read and follow along with!
5/13 c13 James Birdsong
Good work
Good work
2/18/2019 c5 17King Bowser7
Forget about Clover, Bubblegum's the real problem child of the two. While I can get where Clover's rebellious streak comes from, how did Mario and Peach's daughter end up such a brat?
Forget about Clover, Bubblegum's the real problem child of the two. While I can get where Clover's rebellious streak comes from, how did Mario and Peach's daughter end up such a brat?