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12/31/2020 c30 15AuthorandArtist13
This one was an emotional rollercoaster, and I definitely cried reading it! My heart stopped when I read "Alexander Hamilton died at 6:04 pm." Seeing it from John's perspective made the impact even bigger, too, and I also love how everyone rallied-even Jefferson, in his own way, and having Herc care for John while he's also struggling was great. Overall, this was a great chapter, and I hope recovery is in the future for Alex and co.! (And congrats on your college!)
12/26/2020 c1 Guest
Hmmmmmmm,1804,1804,I hope Alex ain't gonna die in this.
12/24/2020 c30 37what a lovely way to burn
first off, congrats on your sh milestone and about getting into your dream college! that’s amazing :) secondly, this chapter made me frickin sob —
so uh. merry christmas if you celebrate :0 sending lots of love!
11/28/2020 c29 Ya girl
wow, I took a step back from this a few months ago, thinking it would never be updated, but here I am, about to read as many new chapters as a I can.
11/19/2020 c19 crappy fan
Yep the worlds best and crappiest authors:3
9/21/2020 c29 Moi
Hello!
I love your story. It's really heavy so I have to break it up, but it's beautiful.
WHOOHOO YOU! 7 MONTHS CLEAN! (Sorry if that's outdated, it was from a while ago.) Anyway, you're an amazing, beautiful person! Thank you for sharing your awesomeness with us!
Sorry to hear about your computer :( Hope it gets fixed soon!
I love the "Wrote my own deliverance" line, too.
We love you dude! Take care of your incredible self.
~Moi

P.S.- I'm sorry, I can't remember if it was in this fic or a different one, so just ignore this if it isn't helpful. This relates to the FABULOUS Lafayette and the French language. In French, there are feminine and masculine versions of each word. Kinda like every word has a pronoun. I'll focus on 'my friend' because that's a phrase our dear Lafayette uses quite frequently. The plural, as we know from Aaron Burr, Sir, is "Mon amis", but that's used because he is referring only to guys. "Mes amis" is used a lot more. The singular masculine version is "Mon ami", and the singular female version is "Mon amie". Bonus: boyfriend is "mon petite ami", and girlfriend is "ma petite amie". Sadly, in French there aren't gender neutral forms of words (yet!). But I'm not a French teacher. I'm not even close to fluent. The grammar isn't really a big deal, I just thought I'd put the info out there. Also, anybody feel free to correct this if you've learned something different. Like I said (SHOWTIME SHOWTIME!), I'm certainly not an expert on this. Soooo...yep!
9/21/2020 c29 Moi
Hello!
I love your story. It's really heavy so I have to break it up, but it's beautiful.
WHOOHOO YOU! 7 MONTHS CLEAN! (Sorry if that's outdated, it was from a while ago.) Anyway, you're an amazing, beautiful person! Thank you for sharing your awesomeness with us!
Sorry to hear about your computer :( Hope it gets fixed soon!
I love the "Wrote my own deliverance" line, too.
We love you dude! Take care of your incredible self.
~Moi

P.S.- I'm sorry, I can't remember if it was in this fic or a different one, so just ignore this if it isn't helpful. This relates to the FABULOUS Lafayette and the French language. In French, there are feminine and masculine versions of each word. Kinda like every word has a pronoun. I'll focus on 'my friend' because that's a phrase our dear Lafayette uses quite frequently. The plural, as we know from Aaron Burr, Sir, is "Mon amis", but that's used because he is referring only to guys. "Mes amis" is used a lot more. The singular masculine version is "Mon ami", and the singular female version is "Mon amie". Bonus: boyfriend is "mon petite ami", and girlfriend is "ma petite amie". Sadly, in French there aren't gender neutral forms of words (yet!). But I'm not a French teacher. I'm not even close to fluent. The grammar isn't really a big deal, I just thought I'd put the info out there. Also, anybody feel free to correct this if you've learned something different. Like I said (SHOWTIME SHOWTIME!), I'm certainly not an expert on this. Soooo...yep! Bye!
8/26/2020 c11 Guest
A HARRY POTTER reference-
8/24/2020 c14 Guest
NOOOOOO! John plz be okay!
8/6/2020 c29 Guest
This is amazing! I felt the panic that all the characters also felt during this story. (That doesn't usualy happen, last time I felt that way was the broken code series in Warrior cats) hope your computer gets repaired! Bye! 33
7/22/2020 c28 Guest
Wow, congratulations on being seven months clean! That's great!
6/28/2020 c22 freshlegend
This is so heavy
6/16/2020 c9 Anika7200
I like your mom.
I mean, it may seem mean, but she cares?
Anyway, please take care of your mental health before trying to please some random internet strangers. Remember, you are not writing this for us. You should write for yourself, and I'm very grateful you chose to share it with us. :)
Your story is great, so keep on writing.
6/16/2020 c8 Anika7200
You've gotta be pretty pissed off to write 18 000 words for an essay due in two months.
6/16/2020 c7 Anika7200
Big sad :(
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