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7/26 c21 11Bonnie Sveen Fan
Don’t apologise for taking so long to update, RL comes first. Looking forward to seeing how Brax will react to his birthday BBQ.
7/26 c21 Braxton54
I really enjoyed this chapter of the story oh dear Danny is causing trouble as usual and I enjoyed the interactions between aria a and Dexter and Ricky and brax and Kyle and Casey looking forward to reading more just take your time updating .
7/13 c20 Guest
Please update
11/25/2020 c20 15FrankElza
I'm enjoying the family dynamic you are portraying with Aria and the brothers. Wonder what is going to happen given your hint?
11/25/2020 c19 FrankElza
Sorry for the long delay in reading and reviewing. Glad Aria is alright despite her broken nose.
9/3/2020 c19 Guest
Love that you are still writing for the Braxtons all these years later!
8/24/2020 c19 11Bonnie Sveen Fan
I liked the chapter, poor Aria though. I wonder what big brother Brax will say about his little sisters relationship.
7/27/2020 c18 15FrankElza
Danny is such a thug going to the extremes of attacking Andy like that and not caring how he knocked Aria too in the process. Wonder what Danny has planned. Look forward to next update.
7/24/2020 c18 11Bonnie Sveen Fan
Poor Aria, Danny is a thug, Brax isn’t going to be happy when he finds out what his father has done. I like how Aria refers to her parents by their first names.
7/1/2020 c17 15FrankElza
Wonder what trouble will happen next. Very unfortunate about Aria suffering with the migranes, hopefully the medication will help her.
4/26/2019 c15 FrankElza
Sorry for late review. That must have been tough for Aria to find Heath in that way and then to get the blame from Cheryl. Glad Brax agreeded to the talent contest, hopefully that will take Aria's mind of the troubles of late. Look forward to reding more.
4/11/2019 c15 41Zoe-eoZ
I liked the new chapter, thanks for sharing. (Currently busy finishing my own H&A fic so my review is a bit late)

Still like Aria with Andy and am curious how her brothers will take it.

Jake is creepy, I wonder what he has in store for them all, and whether he's targeting her next.

Poor Heath!

One piece of constructive criticism I'd have is to not rush it so much.

Sometimes you take the time to write what exactly Aria is doing (playing with the hem of her shirt etc...) but then a crucial scene like the one where she finds Heath happens in the blink of an eye.

There's too much here that you might see in your mind that gets lost in writing if you don't explicitly put it there.

I'd like to see the shock in her face, I want to feel the panic running up her spine, I want to see her run toward her brother and talk to him, fumble with the soaked shirt trying to stave the bleeding while shakily trying to grab her phone and call the ambulance.

Stuff like that. :)

Additional scene breaks would also help here and there. :)

Anyways. Thanks for the read! :)
3/24/2019 c14 Zoe-eoZ
Hi! Sorry about your rough time. I hope things will be looking up from here on out.

I just stumbled upon your story and I gotta admit you did a great job. I didn't think I'd like a "the Braxtons have a sister" storyline as much as I ended up doing. Maybe it's the effortless way you introduced her, out on the water, riding the waves, or the way she naturally interacts with everyone else

I liked the history with Romeo, but I love the idea that she and Andy are hooking up or trying to figure out what they want.

I love how Brax and the others can be a bit more openly worried about a sisters too. lol. And I'd love to see more of that. It's been a fun read so far and I'm really hoping you'll continue this.

Thanks for sharing your story with us! :)
3/19/2019 c14 15FrankElza
Great to read an update. I enjoyed this chapter and it was very beliveable with the Braxton 'reputation' when Charlie arrested Aria, as was Brax's firm reaction that she didn't have a right to question Aria about anything without consent. Shame about Heath's situation but wonder what happened between him and their Dad. Look forward to reading ahead.
10/9/2018 c13 FrankElza
Glad that Brax was supportive of Aria's worries but wonder how it is going to go down with Jake. Lovely moment between Kyle and Aria as they performed the song together. Hopefully her decision to attend the talent festival will work out.
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