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9/21/2020 c1 Guest
This is really good! You should keep writing!
3/25/2018 c1 Guest
This is a good start, seems interesting.
3/4/2018 c1 1AmazingFlowershroom
Ooooh, I like this story a lot! It's got a very interesting premise, and I enjoyed reading it. My one criticism would be to use more varied punctuation so that the story flows better; there's a lot of description punctuated mainly with only full stops and commas, and I think that it would be easier to read if you use things like semi-colons. Other than that, I just want more of the story, so keep up the good work!

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