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5/20/2018 c1 11NarwhaleNapper
Ooooh, you still write for Deltora? And here I thought people forgot about this little gem of a series. I like this short story, though. I feel like it could be something thats canon to the first book, ya know, the prequel before the prequel. Your writing of Prandine is especially menacing. I envy your skill of malicious writing! I guess it's a little too short, especially near the end, since it's not all that assuring, but I think that's the point in your writing; to cause discomfort? Maybe I'm thinking too much into this.
Anyways, don't stop what you're doing.
2/21/2018 c1 90ASongInMyHead
I love how disconcerting this is. I could feel Sharn's discomforting radiating out of my screen. You've down a great job of showing how creepy and evil Prandine is without making it seem forced, so it still felt natural that even Sharn wasn't quite convinced by her own premonitions. Wonderful work, as always!

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