3/12/2019 c1 Telcontar
perhaps instead of just hacking the climate control systems, the students hijacked one of Dr. Pike's projects? One could reference the 'episode with the giant plant monster'
rather than having raven grin right off the bat, she could reference the 93 percenter or her own painful memories of the snow. then she could put aside her displeasure to conduct a one-woman snow-battle against Otto's squad, perhaps teeming up with the laura and shelby agains nigel, franz, wing and otto.
also adress where the runoff goes when it eventually melts, and possibly have someone sabotage the controls, or cause the controls to the machine to get stuck in a giant ball of ice. just some conflict suggestions. love the idea.
perhaps instead of just hacking the climate control systems, the students hijacked one of Dr. Pike's projects? One could reference the 'episode with the giant plant monster'
rather than having raven grin right off the bat, she could reference the 93 percenter or her own painful memories of the snow. then she could put aside her displeasure to conduct a one-woman snow-battle against Otto's squad, perhaps teeming up with the laura and shelby agains nigel, franz, wing and otto.
also adress where the runoff goes when it eventually melts, and possibly have someone sabotage the controls, or cause the controls to the machine to get stuck in a giant ball of ice. just some conflict suggestions. love the idea.
10/2/2018 c1 3DivergentMage
Write one about Raven sneaking up on Otto making a memory loss potion/something and spills it on himself.
Write one about Raven sneaking up on Otto making a memory loss potion/something and spills it on himself.
3/6/2018 c1 23hiveluver
I liked this! You should make another chapter so we can see what happens next! I'm surprised Nero wasn't more panicked about snow inside a VOLCANO haha
I liked this! You should make another chapter so we can see what happens next! I'm surprised Nero wasn't more panicked about snow inside a VOLCANO haha
2/24/2018 c1 7couscous10000
SO FUN!
I loved this! :)
It was really funny, and the characters were mostly in character. (Which made it funnier!) :)
SO FUN!
I loved this! :)
It was really funny, and the characters were mostly in character. (Which made it funnier!) :)