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6/18/2018 c2 17FantasyNerd306
I like how had Rusty be bio-mechanical in this one. I myself tried to apply that before, but I also wanted them to stay more like machines. I see this is like a prelude to the musical, and Greaseball's gang are really harsh on him, but they were like that during the musical so that really isn't new. In all, nice work!
5/26/2018 c2 Tuva the Boss
I am really confused about the plot in this one, but I still really liked it? It was super cute and fuzzy!XD I loved it!
3/26/2018 c1 1TussockPride
Aww, this is a cute start! I really like the ending too, even if it is a bit odd reading about Pilot from this angle. I am so used to being so much closer to I really like Rusty too in this one. He is so nice and sweet, so nice in fact that he needs to man up and take care of himself. He really lives a shitty life as it is now.

So, just keep it up and good luck with this fic. Love you!3
3/11/2018 c1 17FantasyNerd306
I agree with you. Even the smallest changes can make a huge difference. It's interesting how you had some of the engines feel threatened by the airplanes. They are simply competition to them. The Startegic Steam Reserve was an interesting insert in this chapter, and it almost sounds like an endangered species conservation program you'd see advertising on the television every once in a while.

This was an interesting insight in Rusty's past and lineage. It actually makes sense for racing to run in his family's "bloodline". In all, neat chapter!

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