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8h c57 crispybear
Thank you for the update. I agree and echo what everyone else has pointed out in regards to Sabine and her fear of commitment after the Brett fiasco.

Sabine seems awfully confident that she will not lose Ezra in their current relationship state...instead she worries that he’s too perfect? Lol...we should all have that problem.

Maybe at this point in their lives, they are not meant for each other. After all the turmoil and upheaval in his life, I think Ezra would benefit from a stable committed relationship, something that Sabine has no interest in. I know plenty of couples that initially don’t get together, but circumstances change and later they start a relationship based on that. Ezra and Sabine are freshmen so there is still ample time for them to get on the same page. Maybe Ezra would be better dating a fellow Jedi padawan that would already know his secrets and have insight on his Jedi life. Maybe if Cayle gets promoted to a Jedi Master, his new padawan could be a hot female? Lol...that would be funny.

Keep up the great work and looking forward to where you take this next.
10h c57 Tslyp41
I agree with IamJohnWick. Why would Sabine doubt that Ezra might not love her. They did tell each other several time that they love each other. She has said he is the most precious person to him and both “families” know that there close. What else is it going to take another UCLA incident? If that’s the case please be very sooner rather than later.
13h c57 IamJohnWick
Thank you for the update. Sabine's POV in this chapter really adds insight to her mental state and relationship with Ezra. You can see the impact and the extent of anguish that Brett caused her...even sort of explains her drunken escapades the prior semester. I like how she is mindful of his circumstances and tries to protect him when Jaicey grills her as well as when they get to the apartment. Sabine seems pretty confident of holding onto Ezra when Jaicey warns her that she can still lose him. I hope that she is now beyond that stage of making a fatal mistake that can hurt him and lose him.

What puzzles me is why Sabine thinks Ezra does not love her when Jaicey suggested it. They've both told each other that numerous times and she says that he is the most precious thing to her. What else does he have to do? It took a tragic event at UCLA for Sabine to push the envelope and for these two to clear another hurdle and get closer (a common theme in the Ezrabine universe.) Is that what it will take again for the next step?

Looking forward to the next chapter !
14h c57 Achillies453
Great job with this chapter. Seeing Sabine’s POV does shed a lot of light on about how much she was hurt by her ex. I get why she hesitant about officially dating Ezra because he can’t say everything but Ezra actually can’t say everything due to him being with the Jedi. She's scared that he'll be like Brett or worse, and he's scared that she will run from him if she knew the truth. Big difference between them is that Brett became a controlling monster where Ezra was forced to be one and wants to become disciplined as possible and make up for his past. But like I said before if she was eased into that info it can soften the blow especially if her dad is with her when she finds out sense he already knows. She said she doesn’t want to build her life around someone another guy, yet with Ezra she has a dance class with him, half her stuff is at his place, and as Jaicey said they are practically joined at the hip. Sabine even said “ we aren’t dating yet.” But now when they are at the threshold she doesn’t want to take the step. I’m really glad that Jaicey pointed out that Sabine using Ezra even if she doesn’t see it that way, but Jaicey is right she will lose Ezra if she keeps this up. They gotta hit the point where they are definitely official soon and definitely before the Vader news comes out. When they do become official please let it be soon and not after something like the UCLA incident.
14h c1 arctrooper5555
Thank you for updating great job on this love seeing things from Sabine perspective i’m waiting with anticipation to see how she handles it when she finds out about Ezra being Vader and the fact that he is lying to her. But on aside note what ever happened to the community page that you brought up a couple chapters back ?
17h c57 Ash91701
I really love how it’s from Sabine’s POV! Really great chapter! Can’t wait for more!
18h c57 Hmmm
Thank you for the update. Really like the new chapters Mon/Fri. Appreciate that.

The Sabine POV really answered a lot of questions that I had with Sabine. It highlighted her fears and thoughts and how much the breakup with Brett still affects her and that she did not have ulterior motives for her strange explanations of her feelings. And looking at it from her perspective, how do you give yourself heart and soul to someone you still know so little about, that's still a huge mystery? You know them so well on some levels, but yet so little on others.

I liked how Jaicey articulated what many of us were feeling, that Sabine needed to commit to Ezra or she could lose him down the road.

It does remind us that eventually when Ezra's truth comes, it will be a doozy.
20h c57 Guest
Good to see someone point out the obvious to her. That using Ezra like she is, that she will lose him for good. Even if she doesn't listen at least it's been said. It does seem what Ezra is hiding about his past is a definite roadblock. She's scared that he'll be another Brett or worse, and he's scared that she will run from him if she knew the truth. He needs to be truth about his past, but she needs to prove to be trustworthy. Because a drunk frat boy playtoy is no one to confide something as important as vader
20h c57 JRA-7567
Havent reviewed for the last couple of chapters, but I really liked this one. As much as I like it, Ezra's POV was getting stale and this feels like a refreshing new perspective on this. Still, like I said the other chapters were awesome as well. So now Jaicey knows about Brett, that's sure to make an impact later on. And one thing this really helps out is better understanding how Sabine feels about all of this, she just wants to take her time. One thing though, I finally realized just how much of his life his friends know about, and that Sabine knows she doesn't know a lot.
To sum it all up, a refreshing chapter to make us look at the other side, that brings up some more questions about Ezra. Looking forward to next chapter!
1/6 c56 Kudos
Thank you for the update. It’s a tribute to you that you have us readers guessing what comes next AND so invested in your AU.

While the Sabine/Ezra romance has taken center stage (which I enjoy very much...like many others, I’m just waiting for the bombshell/cliff hanger that will emerge from Sabine’s indecisiveness in regards to her and Ezra) there are SO many aspects of SW that we still don’t know how they fit in this AU. Everyone from Ezra’s father, his brother, the Sith, President Palpatine and his underlings, the Trade Federation, the Kaminoans, the Mandalorians, etc. I’m looking forward to seeing how these pieces all emerge and fit together.
1/4 c56 Tslyp41
I have to agree with the others about the vagueness of this relationship. How do they have this kind of relationship but Sabine says he is only 1 percent into her heart after all this time. The whole 99 percent closed off makes it sound like she wants to dip out. She has dropped many hints about them dating and even said “we aren’t dating yet.” Yes she was done dirty by her ex and wanted to not date for a while, but she is also on her last life with Ezra after certain events. Does it really have to be something dramatic every time for them to get even closer? No doubt problems will arise in there relationship such as her ex probably trying to come back and Ezra’s identity but they have to get together officially soon. Wasn’t he going to visit her family during spring break after his business with the kaminoans? It be weird if they weren’t together. It took forever for them to get together it I think I can saw on all of our behalf that we don’t want to wait long for her to say let’s be official to Ezra
1/4 c56 Trouble
Cue the Jaws theme song...cuz trouble is coming...

Why does Sabine think 99% of her is impenetrable/unreadable? How does Ezra even respond to the fact that he gets only 1%? Thank you for the 1% that you allow me and. Should be happy with that? What percent did her ex Brett get? Such a weird way of telling someone that they mean a lot to you.

Feels like there is a Mandolorian roadblock coming up...maybe an arranged marriage to bind clans or her ex cones back in the picture.
1/4 c56 hellothere209
I have to agree with my fellow readers, the way Sabine worded that whole "1% is yours, 99% is closed" made it seem like she wanted to make sure Ezra didn't get any ideas about a relationship. Maybe that's not how it sounds to them, but that just leaves so much on the table that could go wrong. If it does go south, I actually don't think it'll be on Sabine's end, might be on Ezra's. Something has to go wrong for one of them to try to take the next step. Also, we might be on the edge of concertation with the Trade Federation having battle droids, looking forward to seeing everything play out.
1/4 c56 IamJohnWick
Great update.

Yes Sabine's actions are a bit troubling. On one hand, she is loving, grateful for Ezra and tells him that she loves him and how important he is to her...yet, she won't commit to him saying she doesn't want a relationship. Telling someone they can have the 1% of yourself that is reachable (the other 99% is not available) but hey, at least no one else can...talk about a mixed message. It's almost like she's leaving herself an out. Why? So Ezra is simply a Friend with Benefits that she cares a lot about? That doesn't seem right either.

Like a certain dashing smuggler would say " I have a bad feeling about this."

Keep up the great work
1/3 c56 1Shadow3636
Great chapter! This is getting really interesting, or maybe I’m reading too far into it, idk.

I’m going to guess the droids spoken of are super battle droids. As for the trade federation, I was halfway expecting the Jedi council to send Ezra in as a spy. Say that Vader escaped, when in actuality Ezra is just a double agent, with the trade federation thinking they have Vader backing them. Anyways thanks for the update, it really was a great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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