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5/2/2018 c12 Sarah
The tower fall thing reminds me of when Senel fainted like a wussy and fell from the Wings of Light XD
9/2/2017 c11 Phoena
You're alive! Welcome back!

I'm not sure what to write up in this review since I'm quite happy to see that you're alright. (A bit of a side-note, Melanie's Zaveid's interaction was cuuute!)
8/8/2017 c11 AliceLillyClover
I love this fanfic so much! Zavied is my favorite character in Zestiria so I am so happy there is at least one fanfics where he plays a major part! Thank you so much! Please keep up the good work!
8/7/2017 c11 Guest
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8/5/2017 c11 Legendz25
Yay a update \('0')/ looking forward to seeing what comes next. Please keep up the great work
8/3/2017 c10 22Underwater Dreaming
Oh lord the fire trial was hellish. At first I didn't notice the numbers on the torches so I wasted a while trying to figure it out :(

...then came the water temple... Stupid water temple...

Looking forward to see how Mel will progress. Will Sorey and the others find out she did the trial? I wonder how they'd react!
7/4/2017 c10 The Rupture
Update bro.
2/10/2017 c8 Shade
Really? I love Self-inserts, if they're good. There are a lot of badly written si, but this one is not, mostly least. Your plot do jump a bit without explaining, but the fic is good and easy to understand once you've read a bit, so it's all good. I hope you'll continue this fic, it has great potential.
Plus I like it, think of the fans. ;)
2/6/2017 c8 Ali
I really like this. I love your OC and your story. It's really entertaining. Can't wait for the next chapter.
2/1/2017 c8 Phoena
Welcome back! :)

I kept my bookmark on this fic in case you showed up again.
(It always makes me feel sad when I see authors that lose interest in their own stories or never show up again. But I can understand.)

That reaction? Ouch. But I understand their reasoning. Mel mentioned sheltering an injured seraph, and armatizing with said seraph (who is still an unknown factor to them)? Certainly very suspicious! It seems that the crying and her overreaction with Sorey has been overlooked, though that's quite the stretch to assume that she is attempting to spread malevolence from just her reaction? Odd, but understandable. They can't trust every little human on their journey after all.

Their naivety(?)[taking things at face value, thus jumping to conclusions] is a peeve but there's nothing that can really be done about it. They will simply have to learn more about humanity's very many faces.
11/2/2016 c7 Phoena
Thanks for the update! I was waiting really keenly for it!

Ohhh. Yeah, this chapter really clears it up.
So this new reset timeline is the original timeline without Melanie's interference.
(The problem about why I was confused was that even though I played the game, I still didn't understand the ending. Maybe I should just supplement my knowledge with a Let's Play of ToZ, LOL.)

And whoa, that cliffhanger ending! How will Sorey and the others react, I wonder? Hmm...
10/30/2016 c7 DELETEDiurpowieurpw
w /picks up chapter and hugs it/ yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssss I approve of dis. Dos be good shit right here.
I can't wait for the part - /is muffled to not spoil/
10/30/2016 c6 nyaw2468
hmm self insert OC, no ploblem but its time travel in chap 5 its good thing i finish the game with both ending... its kinda confused with the time skip, i like pairing, its OcxZaveid right? or not?
10/17/2016 c6 Random reviewer
This is really interesting! I hope you continue to update this! I would love to read more of Mel's adventures!
9/15/2016 c6 northwind132
Love this story so far. I hope you update it again soon.
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