11/17/2017 c2 19EiswolfZero
Ahhh loving These two chapters and the Twist to what happened to Jack.
poor poor Jack
Ahhh loving These two chapters and the Twist to what happened to Jack.
poor poor Jack
5/22/2017 c2 Guest
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
5/22/2017 c2 PBJ
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMG THIS IS AMAZING BEST ROFG STORY EVER AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT SO SO MUCH!
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMG THIS IS AMAZING BEST ROFG STORY EVER AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT SO SO MUCH!
5/22/2017 c2 Guest
Wow. This is awesome, incredible, fantastic, beautiful, a masterpiece. I love it.
Wow. This is awesome, incredible, fantastic, beautiful, a masterpiece. I love it.
5/22/2017 c2 Guest
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTT?! Okay, so friggin awesome! This- YOU- how!?- I can't even- Okay, THIS, right here, this entire story, is golden! Yes, it is the holy grail of RotG AUs. That is how perfect it is, and I cannot wait to read more!
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTT?! Okay, so friggin awesome! This- YOU- how!?- I can't even- Okay, THIS, right here, this entire story, is golden! Yes, it is the holy grail of RotG AUs. That is how perfect it is, and I cannot wait to read more!
5/22/2017 c1 gghii
Can I just say, how much I love your style? I don't know what it is about it, but I just love it so much.
Can I just say, how much I love your style? I don't know what it is about it, but I just love it so much.
5/22/2017 c2 3
OoOoOoOoOoOohhhhhhh, I just got shivers. This is a great idea, and you play it out really well. I can't wait to see how Jack reacts to the guardians and what they'll do to try and recruit him, boy will THAT be a disaster.
OoOoOoOoOoOohhhhhhh, I just got shivers. This is a great idea, and you play it out really well. I can't wait to see how Jack reacts to the guardians and what they'll do to try and recruit him, boy will THAT be a disaster.
5/22/2017 c2 Guest
Whoooooooo! Awe-some! This is so awesome! PTSD Jack? Pitch trying to get Jack on his side from the start? Trust issues!Jack? SIGN ME THE HECK UP!
Whoooooooo! Awe-some! This is so awesome! PTSD Jack? Pitch trying to get Jack on his side from the start? Trust issues!Jack? SIGN ME THE HECK UP!
4/22/2017 c1 flamingotm
Seeing Pitch next to PTSD makes me think what if someone made a fanfic where the letters were actually spirits that caused PTSD?
Seeing Pitch next to PTSD makes me think what if someone made a fanfic where the letters were actually spirits that caused PTSD?
11/24/2016 c2 36Eagle Dreamer
I think that this would make an excellent story. if you decide to continue it, please let me know.
I think that this would make an excellent story. if you decide to continue it, please let me know.
11/12/2016 c1 Guest
this was wonderfully written. particularly I admired how despite the AU, you nailed down the core of each character - Jack, the independent neutral guy, and Pitch, so much more subtle than many give him credit for; I like how you didn't make the manipulation factor too obvious. overall, real interesting start, and honestly such a refreshing fic.
this was wonderfully written. particularly I admired how despite the AU, you nailed down the core of each character - Jack, the independent neutral guy, and Pitch, so much more subtle than many give him credit for; I like how you didn't make the manipulation factor too obvious. overall, real interesting start, and honestly such a refreshing fic.
11/12/2016 c2 Guest
Awesome story so far! Please update soon. I can hardly wait.
Awesome story so far! Please update soon. I can hardly wait.
11/11/2016 c2 JFunderburker
This is the best written and most refreshing dark!Jack fic I've ever read. You're taking your own sweet time in revealing what happened to Jack, and while not knowing is driving me crazy, I think that's a great choice on your part. And the fact that Jack no longer speaks English fluently is so interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.
This is the best written and most refreshing dark!Jack fic I've ever read. You're taking your own sweet time in revealing what happened to Jack, and while not knowing is driving me crazy, I think that's a great choice on your part. And the fact that Jack no longer speaks English fluently is so interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next.