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12/7/2020 c10 1pinkdynamite
Love love love this chapter! I'm so excited about the dragon, you have no idea. Can't wait for more!
12/2/2020 c10 39Luin-fanel
Only 15? I was going for more than that... but it's ok, I think, write what you need.
I really love this chapter, we need a fight between that pair of pig heads, hahaha, I think they are in character, just think about it, they are not so young as in the show, Van is not an orphan at all and he is not a king, he is free to live in peace and with little worries over Fanelia.
And then, when she assures she is going with him, zaz! The dragon is there with them. Is it time to go home? I think yes, they need three things in the same place at the same time for leave, the dragon, the ryuujin and Hitomi's pendant with Hitomi of course.
I want to read the next one, their arrival to Gaea is going to be really different, I'm to curious and to excited to read how are you going to manage that, don't worry about the romantic stuff, I think it would happend in time, but, please, if they fall in love and she comes back without him, give them something more than a hug, they are two adults after all and I always thanks they deserves more.

SARABA
12/2/2020 c10 CovertEyes
Everything about this is perfect. I can totally see grown up Van and Hitomi having these conversations. So many times authors write Hitomi and they get her all wrong. I think she's spot on here. I especially felt she was in character when she was talking about her parents' expectations for her to marry.

I love the development of their relationship. It feels very natural. I'm all aboard this ship. ;-)

There's something about your writing style that leaves me feeling like I've just spent a day at the spa. Don't worry, I still feel tension and suspense, it's just so lovely. I will read every word you write, whether that's another five chapters or ten. Take as long as you need.
12/2/2020 c10 hitomi21
I like how you portray these two I’ve read a lot of Escaflowne fanfiction and there are a fair few that are unable to reach this level. At least from what I see. Hope you update soon and thanks for the good read!
11/17/2020 c4 CovertEyes
I think the real question is, are you still with the guy who was Team Allen? Because that might have been a deal breaker for me. Ha!
11/16/2020 c2 CovertEyes
I really love how you've described Merle's voice: It's so visceral I can almost feel it.

I love that Hitomi gets a little excitable once in a while.
11/15/2020 c9 17Eterna de Solary
This fic is amazing! Thank you!
11/14/2020 c9 CovertEyes
I love that Van sings to Hitomi to comfort her. My husband has done that for me. How many of those 100 verses are you writing? And what song (Revenge) are you referring to?

You really create such a peaceful atmosphere between Hitomi and Van. It's very soothing to read. LOL

I'm looking forward to having her last question answered!
11/14/2020 c9 39Luin-fanel
I enjoy the chapter a lot, and it was a really extraordinary surprise for me, thanks a lot, I love to start my day with Van... and Hitomi and the dragon.
Now, after Van's explanation I'm curious too, what was going on between Van and that dragón?
11/12/2020 c1 CovertEyes
Per your question in the A/N as to whether these two are in character, I love Van and Hitomi's more mature personalities here. Hitomi is maybe a little quiet, but I'll chalk that up to age as I got a lot quieter in my mid 20s too. (Also, perhaps working with loud teens all day makes one cherish inner peace, which is something that Hitomi radiates in your story so far.) I love how clinical her analysis of Van is when they are fleeing the dragon together. Van is the soulful, gentle, and brave Van that really shone through in the series when he wasn't forced to fight. I'm really looking forward to learning what it is he and the dragon were after.
11/12/2020 c8 1pinkdynamite
Holy hell, that ending! Not gonna lie, Folken has always been my favourite character and I'm so SO anxious to find out what's happening in Fanelia. Thank you, thank you for continuing to write this, I'm so glad you're back!
11/12/2020 c8 39Luin-fanel
Thanks a lot for the new chapter, I love it, love the dragon in Van's dream, the feather in the shower, Van completely nervous 'cause Hitomi staring at him practically naked with a towel and all the thinking about domesticity.
love dragons too, dragons are wonderful and magnificent. Please write more, you just hook me with the light pilar and Folken talking with Hitomi, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!

SARABA
11/11/2020 c8 CovertEyes
I'm so excited you want to finish this! It's such a unique storyline and you are an excellent writer! This chapter was a great jump-start. Thank you!
10/16/2020 c7 CovertEyes
This...is amazing! Oh, how I wish you would continue. It's so good. I love V&H so much here.

Four years isn't too long. I've see longer spans between updates.
7/23/2018 c7 SurlaLune
Just wanted to stop by and let you know that I'm really enjoying your story.
Your writing style is unique and the plot in general is so different from what I've previously read in other FF. Thank you for sharing your wonderful mind with us, and please continue to do excited to see what will happen next!
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