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1/26/2017 c6 GLB
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12/26/2016 c6 BLOOD DARKLING
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12/24/2016 c6 Guest666-69
Strawberry shaped face? XD I think you mean heart shaped face lol.
12/23/2016 c5 Guest666-69
Solomon a "dear friend" to Hagi? Might want to reconsider that one. That is stretching things too far lol.
12/22/2016 c3 Guest666-69
Caution: I think you're making Saya too much like Diva. That's not needed for her to accept what she is. And for Saya to go straight to Diva seems too sudden after the past 100 years or so in conflict with each other. Might wanna go for Saya & Hagi moving into their own place. I see Hagi being a wine producer and professional sommelier to make money and provide for Saya now that she isn't interested in war. I also see Saya being able to drink human blood but not kill the humans. She can do this easily enough in the big city streets at night or even in a club for 'vampires' (yes they exist). I'm sure she'll easily find humans who will let her drink from them. She could even just walk the streets at night as she is - or change into a child - to lure other human 'predators' to her so she can feed.
12/21/2016 c4 Guest666-69
Oh my gosh! More please!
10/21/2016 c4 GLB
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