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4/8 c9 DimensionPoint
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1/15 c1 Sergei
You made my day!
12/7/2020 c1 Guest
And then Judy wakes up, realizing that it was all a nightmare, a horrible dreadful nightmare. A convoluted and insane nightmare, all with these ugly creatures called humans, and apparently she fell for one of them, Ben his name was, wait, why would she remember his name. And why would she ever develop feelings for him, and worse disregard Nick entirely. It was all so horrible, it was something that an edgy loser, some pathetic military fetishist would think up, but on top of that she had ferlings for another man, and nan that wasn't Nick, it was such a disgusting nightmare, the thought of it, just being with another man, a man that wasn't her fox made her sick to her stomach, and the thought of having this freak touch him, just some common slut and leaving Nick for the dust want to make her vomit but all she did was chock, she was about to cry, to scream amd burst into tears out of the guilt. As tear were streaming down her face she turned to face who was fast asleep, why, why would she ever do that to him, they been through so much together and she would dare to betray him by laying with another man all becuase he wassomethong that was entirely different. No woman should ever have thoughts like this. Nick deserved better. He was a devoted husband, and a far better lover than any other man, better than this Benjamin guy. Oh god that would be worse, that would explain such horrible dreams, was she bored of him, after what they been through she couldn't be, she didn't want to believe it. All these thoughts raced into her mind, she was about to burst into tears.

Then, her husband Nick, turned and placed an arm on Judy and pulled her close, dispite the fact that he was still fast asleep, it was like Nick knew about her nightmare and came to comfort her, that alone suprised it even stopped her from crying though she was still teary eyed. She laid down on the Nicks and buried herself in his chest. The last of her tears still running her face damped his fur, she gripped Nick tightly never wanting to let go. If she was going to be with someone, it would be Nick, and if she would was going to be ravaged by any man, it would be Nick Wilde, the only man to have the right to ravage her, if she was get pregnant, would be Nick that impregnates her, if cum splatters were going to left on the walls of the apartment it would Nick's leftovers (though that was more than true). If she was going to get ravaged, spanked and filled with cum, it was Nick that would do it, not this Benjamin human egdelord guy, not any other man, no one else, no one else, she wouldn't dare, she rather die than not be with Nick. If anything, this Benjaminguy would have the shit kicked out of him if he ever stepped near her, if he ever existed in the first place. She gripped Nick's chest, hopping that when she fell asleep, it would be a far better dream than the one she had. "Judy" Nick wispered in his sleep, Judy caught hrr name escaping his lips, "Judy" he said again, "Judy, I love you, you are the best thing that could ever happen to me, you are the world to me, my everything, and I will never let you go." Such words touch Judy's heart, did he really mean, no of course he meant it. It was the sweet words that Nick would wisppered to her when she was falling asleep, and after the horrible nightmare she experienced, being touch by another man, those words were pure heaven to her aching heart. It made tears stream down her cheeks, tear of love and joy, to know she was loved by her Nick, the fox that made her smile ever day was enough to calm her nerves, amd such sweet words would even help her fall into a peaceful sleep. "And I to will never let you go, I'm yours and only yours, forever. I will always love you, my dumb stupid fox." And with those final words, the rabbit closed her eyes, falling right back to sleep in the arms of the man that she loves and will only love.
12/7/2020 c9 Guest
Remember, this is this is a guy who said "When I create OCs, I don't make them goofy or jokers, I make them anti-hero like, serious, nihilistic" So yeah we got a super serial badass over here, I bet they all habe this as there theme music watch?vyScewcIL0aM

Also, all the human males in his story, from victor to ben seem to have a hard on for bunnies and some how Judy os not creeped out by this.
9/3/2019 c1 Rose
Hey
So, the first thing I want to mention is that I'm French: so, the use of the term "Commonwealth Federation" (which, as I understand it, is the body that directs human society ), makes me want to burn all the Pangea (it's practically heretical as a term, honestly).
And in a tone that corresponds more to the story (that's it, the irritation related to the term is down, sorry for that), the story starts very well and your style is very interesting.
I know that the last update dates from a long time ago and that my review will probably not even read, buuuut I wanted to write it.
8/25/2019 c4 1AngelKings
...well done...you made me care in order to feel the death...well played...
8/24/2019 c3 Interstate2011
Actually, the spelling is "Sergeant."
6/30/2019 c3 Kommandant
HR was too underpowered. Give em' a chance at least.
11/23/2018 c9 Guest
I do hope you manage to come back to this story. It's interesting. I would love to see how Zootopia plays out with humans thrown into the mix
10/18/2018 c9 Wayne Goheen
I think I died inside when I found out there aren't any more chapters

I mean, this is probobaly one of the best things I have ever read

And now i'm stuck on a cliffhanger that will NEVER END

*Wayne has exploded*
10/20/2018 c7 BlackPrince007
Amazing story! I’m really hoping your going to update the story soon can’t wait to continue reading it
7/30/2018 c1 2techno02
Very nice introduction! Lovely writing style!
6/13/2018 c2 1Jhunt883
ad victorium? what are we in the brotherhood of steel suddenly?
5/4/2018 c1 AleDS98
I hope it will soon update the story. I can not wait to read it again.
4/18/2018 c8 AleDS98
hey ZombieSlayerOfTheUnderWorld have passed almost 2 months, do you have any news?
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