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5/30/2018 c33 4rbrooks25
Lady Earth may cause some issues. :) I was curious, what happened to Demona in this world? Is she dead or just missing?
5/30/2018 c32 rbrooks25
This is a good chapter. I posted the critique I have on the last chapter, but the most important part of any story is here. The story is intriguing and holds the interest of the reader. :)
5/30/2018 c31 rbrooks25
The only thing that I would change is the Elisa and Goliath parts. I've never been a fan of that pairing. It's a good story that seems to flow well, but if I may make a recommendation. I've been thinking about this for awhile, but I don't think you need to include the POV's. If you seperate the paragraph's I believe that the reader can better ascertain what is going on with descriptions. It's just a thought. Overall, the story is unique and very interesting and I can overlook the Elisa and Goliath relationship which is the first time I have read a story with that pairing :) Great work on this!
11/17/2016 c17 12SuperSOULEATERLOVER
Mooooooore
10/20/2016 c10 19Author of the Insane
Wow... Okay, that I did NOT see coming
10/18/2016 c1 110ZabuzasGirl
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!
10/16/2016 c9 19Author of the Insane
Halfling. Very nice touch
10/4/2016 c3 Author of the Insane
now I am getting curious. keep it up
10/1/2016 c1 Author of the Insane
I am loving this story. glad my own could inspire you. can't wait to see more

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