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11/10/2016 c2 31SweetToothDinosaur
I am really liking your organization for this story! You set the ages for the characters in a really nice range! It seems like a canonical count for their ages because I headcanoned specific birthdays for them so that resulted in different numbers depending on the month.

I enjoy that you've written nicely with flowing words. I can really tell you've done effort for your story! Also, allowing Beni to wear something not-pink is WONDERFUL. I know that she represents pink, but it really is annoying because it's because it's a "girls-only colour." But reading that she wears different clothes is what makes her have a nice strong suit. She wears more colours than just pink only.

I like the way you're writing your fanfiction, I hope that you keep doing good work!

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11/10/2016 c1 SweetToothDinosaur
Ah wow wowowowowwowowoww!
i thought that i wouldn't see a new writer for GenBeni!

I have to say that this is a pretty interesting AU and fairly unique too. I do not know what this AU will turn out to be, but I would know it's different! I say this story is unique because most of my fanfics follows an order of Gen & Guren & Chooki as a higher-leveled group while Beni & Ceylan & Toxsa are the lower-leveled group.

I see what you did there! Splitting up the characters into warm colours and cool colours! Really unique!

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