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4/8/2020 c40 6Chipster-roo
This chapter was pretty intense.

Among other things, Daffodil returns, and is called out for what he truly is. He plots a mass murder, but instead he is the one who ends up dying, absorbed into the cavern wall, a fitting death. Hopefully that's the last we see of him.

Cynthia's rescue was pretty dramatic, she is becoming one of my favourite characters of this series. The interactions between her and Rosie are really great; Leo and Jason's relationship is also nice, now that they are working together.

Looks like the final challenge to save Chestnut will be soon...looking forward to future updates.
4/3/2020 c40 48Drewmoviefan
Excellent Chapter! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
4/1/2020 c39 6Chipster-roo
A pretty interesting chapter.

It is really nice to see Blackberry again, after so long, even if it's only in a dream. This is a pretty cute scene, and the dream is also very mysterious. All this talk about “five more times”, could this perhaps refer to five more instalments in the series? And also Jason might not really be Leo's brother? I suppose all will be revealed later on.

Leo and Jason have an interesting conversation, in which they both apologize for their past mistakes. Bigwig isn't as quick to forgive Jason, and keeps insulting him throughout the rest of the chapter. Nice to see Michael standing up to him though.

Later on in the chapter, Rosie and the others return; all groups appear to have been reunited now, except for Chestnut and the others. Cynthia and Pipkin's romance is pretty cute. She mentions her desire to return with Pipkin after her studies, but I have a feeling it won't be so simple...

The chapter ends with Cynthia falling down a hole. This is a pretty dramatic scene, and it is up to Rosie to save her. Then, Fiver has a terrifying vision...

Looking forward to the next chapters.
3/28/2020 c39 14florapaw
i will never be able to get over how good this dialogue writing is good lord is it good!

(also i stared at the "for you, lovely, all the kisses in the world" line for a solid minute because it was so beautiful thank u so much for writing it)
3/27/2020 c39 48Drewmoviefan
Very Superb and Twist Chapter! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
3/17/2020 c38 6Chipster-roo
It's a well-written chapter.

The highlight would be Rosie's conversation with Tiger-Lily; their interactions are handled really well. There is really no easy solution for Cynthia and Pipkin...

Rosie mistaking Hazel for elil was pretty funny. The scene with Uncle Fir, Chestnut and the others was also really cute. It is especially interesting to hear about Fir's (tragic) backstory.

Looking forward to further updates.
3/16/2020 c38 48Drewmoviefan
Excellent Chapter! Glad to see a group reunited with another. That tackle was unexpected, but had a good laugh, at the same time Rosie done it to protect her sister. Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
12/31/2019 c37 6Chipster-roo
A good chapter.

Fiver's near-death experience was pretty dramatic. The conversation between Pipkin and Hawkbit was nice. Hopefully this will finally put an end to his baseless fears that he is responsible for his parents' deaths.

The end appears close. Jason found the magic acorn, which would allow all the humans to return to their original dimension (although, this probably won't happen until after Chestnut and the others have been safely returned to the warren). Also, they find out that Larkspur really is a villain, and that Chestnut and the others are heading straight into a trap. Hopefully they can be saved before it's too late.

Also, happy new year 2020! Hopefully it'll be better than 2019...
12/27/2019 c37 14florapaw
obligatory reminder that i love jason and everyone is being horrible to him :(

anyway serious question what the heck is gonna happen to cynthia and pipkin after the whole journey is completed i’m going to cry if their ending is sad bro :’(
12/26/2019 c37 48Drewmoviefan
Awesome Chapter! Love the Comforts Hawkbit, Leo and Fiver did for Pipkin! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
12/24/2019 c36 6Chipster-roo
Leo and Fiver are reunited; this is overall a good scene. Not sure why the bird transported Fiver, but it's nice to see that he was not kidnapped by villains as I previously thought.

The Gold-Toothed Shadow returns! Hopefully they can be stopped before they cause any more damage.

Jason talks with Cornstalk. I remember seeing Cornstalk in the first instalment, although I can't remember exactly what his role was. It's a good thing that Jason doesn't want Leo dead, but I still have a bad feeling about the whole thing.

This is soon confirmed, as the wolves, after providing Jason with a vague answer to Chestnut's situation, try to eat him, as per Fiver's vision. Thankfully, the others manage to save him before it is too late, in a very dramatic scene. The chapter ends with a cliffhanger as they fall down a waterfall (Possibilities includes a very similar scene; sorry :/ )

Merry Christmas!
12/20/2019 c36 48Drewmoviefan
Awesome Chapter! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
11/25/2019 c35 6Chipster-roo
An interesting and well-written chapter. The scenes with Leo and Rosie, and also Pipkin and Cynthia, were especially nice.

Jason is gone, and I can understand Leo's frustration. Considering Leo's anger, and Jason's conspiracy against him, this can't end well. Fiver is missing too; considering what happened at the end of the previous chapter, it seems he's been kidnapped! Hopefully the others can save him...

Looking forward to the next update.
11/23/2019 c35 48Drewmoviefan
Excellent Chapter! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! Especially for finding Jason.
10/7/2019 c34 14florapaw
it's once again real loving jason hours yall

epic chapter as always. pipkin and cynthia are literally the best thing since sliced bread they are BABY
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