2/2/2018 c8 22MelissaRM
I love the story line and the characters but has anyone ever told you that you write like a script? It'd be nice to see more descriptions, not just talking. I used to write like this, too. I think everyone starts like this. But, as you're writing, you can see the scene in your head. Your readers can't so you need to give them more details. Please consider this constructive criticism, not just a random complaint. You're creative and have a lot of potential.
I love the story line and the characters but has anyone ever told you that you write like a script? It'd be nice to see more descriptions, not just talking. I used to write like this, too. I think everyone starts like this. But, as you're writing, you can see the scene in your head. Your readers can't so you need to give them more details. Please consider this constructive criticism, not just a random complaint. You're creative and have a lot of potential.
7/19/2017 c1 Katie
Love it so much! Great job it was super cute!
Love it so much! Great job it was super cute!
7/8/2017 c13 Sakura Crystals
Love watching Bran fall for someone that is more practical for him. I wish that he finds love again in the books someday!
Love watching Bran fall for someone that is more practical for him. I wish that he finds love again in the books someday!
6/30/2017 c13 Novoselac 61
All ur chapters are great can't wait to read more
All ur chapters are great can't wait to read more
6/6/2017 c13 Leopard Queen
Thank you for updating. I think I like this chapter the best so far. Can't wait for more.
Thank you for updating. I think I like this chapter the best so far. Can't wait for more.
5/9/2017 c11 Deb Y
Please continue your story! I really am enjoying it tremendously!
Please continue your story! I really am enjoying it tremendously!
5/8/2017 c5 Deb Y
I just wanted you to know I am thoroughly enjoying the story. There is a spelling correction.
Wrapped (as in to wrap around something)
I love this story so please keep writing!
I just wanted you to know I am thoroughly enjoying the story. There is a spelling correction.
Wrapped (as in to wrap around something)
I love this story so please keep writing!
2/13/2017 c11 Diana novoselac
I love your work can't wait to read more
I love your work can't wait to read more
12/11/2016 c11 Leopard Queen
Now I really can't wait until the next chapter. I really want to know what happens next.
Now I really can't wait until the next chapter. I really want to know what happens next.
12/11/2016 c8 2Jewels47
Wow this chapter took a lot of turns good job. Can't wait to see where they all turn out. Particularly interested in the Jesse/Wolfe interaction. Keep up the good work. Love getting a new chapter to read.
Wow this chapter took a lot of turns good job. Can't wait to see where they all turn out. Particularly interested in the Jesse/Wolfe interaction. Keep up the good work. Love getting a new chapter to read.
11/6/2016 c7 24Leopard Queen
This story is getting better and better. I love it. Can't wait for another chapter.
This story is getting better and better. I love it. Can't wait for another chapter.