6/28 c1 me
you know, Aron and Miriam wouldn't have been overworked. They were from the tribe of Levi, who were not as burdened as the other tribes
you know, Aron and Miriam wouldn't have been overworked. They were from the tribe of Levi, who were not as burdened as the other tribes
6/21/2019 c1 commanderbog
This is so good! IT's nice to see Aaron and Moses coming around to one another. I like how you commented on Moses's new status when the people "straightened" when he passed by them Great!
This is so good! IT's nice to see Aaron and Moses coming around to one another. I like how you commented on Moses's new status when the people "straightened" when he passed by them Great!
6/20/2016 c1 8Prince.of.egypt.stories
This is really good! I've always wondered what Moses' feelings would be like after leaving so much behind in Egypt and not even knowing if Ramses, his brother for 18 years, was still alive (I think he was because really Ramses II lived to be 90 something and I think that would be a good way of making him suffer, to stay alive and see his broken kingdom) And your story showed just that! :D Good job, you should write more of these!
This is really good! I've always wondered what Moses' feelings would be like after leaving so much behind in Egypt and not even knowing if Ramses, his brother for 18 years, was still alive (I think he was because really Ramses II lived to be 90 something and I think that would be a good way of making him suffer, to stay alive and see his broken kingdom) And your story showed just that! :D Good job, you should write more of these!