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12/24/2020 c30 6iron maker2
Pure malice, pure rage. this mist is the grudge created from all the warfare that happened on the sea and it latched into one who had darkness in there heart.

This will be an extremely tough fight. both emotionally and physically.
12/23/2020 c30 2Aires Drake
Well, now THAT is a terrifying way to end the chapter. Nice and constant reminders throughout the chapter that it's a possibility.

And then that payoff of corruption. Well done.

Also, a nice change-of-pace chapter from another set of perspective.
12/21/2020 c30 2Captain Kurt Hoffman
Hi there!

Iku, you stupid... You just couldn't stop bugging her, could you? Now look what you've done.

Regards,
The Captain
12/20/2020 c30 8Zoe Walker
Great job Iku. You literally tormented your counterpart until she snapped and got taken over by the forces of darkness. I hope you get court-martialled for this, because you stepped over the line here ages ago.
12/20/2020 c30 The Shadows Mistress
yay a new chapter thanks, love the story especially the lore you are building , looking forward to more Yamato though :)
12/20/2020 c30 mega1987
looks like iku just pushed her reincarnate over that tipping point...

i dont think any sorry will make it up for it...
12/20/2020 c30 2Fog Repair Ship Akashi
Oh dear...this isn't good. I hope Ikuni will be o.k. Glad to see you back but damn that cliffhanger though.
5/5/2020 c29 1QE1
Loving the story so far. My complaint, not going to call it criticism because this is personal preference, is that introducing so many characters isn't adding that much for me because it also takes away written time for characters that are already established. But some people really prefer that.

Did Admiral Treston ever get to the bottom of Iowa's paperwork issue? I think you said he discovered that people were piling their own work onto her and then he realized it might have happened to her in the past, but I don't remember that ever being resolved onscreen. Did I miss it, did it happen offscreen, or has it not happened yet?

Other than that, yeah really brilliant. Good characterizations, the plot is constantly interesting, Yamato sounds awesome.
4/22/2020 c29 vrppga
Hope that another chapter will come out relatively soon
4/21/2020 c29 Zombie Overlord
Meanwhile, I am waiting for the absolute political clusterfuck that the Japanese have been sitting on since Chapter 1. The drama surrounding Haruka and her dehumanization from human to shipgirl. You can’t clamp off a whole part of your self, your ego, your bonds with friend and family without it all coming back in a frankly ugly fashion. The mask of Yamato she is wearing, is rather fragile and when her family comes knocking. It’s going to be gross, dramatic, and absolutely nuts. Humans are horrible, we do horrible things “in the name of Greater Good” but you can’t escape the punishment of the sin. It will come in time. So watching that drama explode is gonna be lit; when it comes out the Japanese government more or less stole a girl from her family, and keeping her from them, to be their bonafide mascot. Heads are going to roll.
4/21/2020 c29 2Captain Kurt Hoffman
Frankly if Iku is openly trying to ruin Ikuni's personal life, perhaps this is a necessary escalation, and honestly Iku had best not forget it.

Regards,
The Captain
1/2/2020 c28 Captain Kurt Hoffman
Hi there!

Cheryl is going to be a carrier, isn't she?

It's good to see this is still alive. That omake was enough in itself to make this chapter a worthwhile reading. :)

Regards,
The Captain
1/2/2020 c28 2Lord-Sylph
I’ll admit, the sudden scene swaps caught me off guard, maybe next time add a dashed line between scene’s?

So Cheryl might be one of the reincarnated Duckies, verrrrry interesting
1/1/2020 c28 6Hayane234
this reminds me of yuubari and akashi building the green dragon zord in that other fic here on FF
1/1/2020 c28 The Shadows Mistress
love this story, happy to see an update, well the games a foot.
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