11/23/2017 c10 Guest
Yuta meant Q but ibuki fought oro instead and what did makato ment he casue her dad death?
Yuta meant Q but ibuki fought oro instead and what did makato ment he casue her dad death?
8/20/2017 c9 Guest
The yellow man? Who that is it Q cause that
Be terrifying since no one knows who side he on?
The yellow man? Who that is it Q cause that
Be terrifying since no one knows who side he on?
8/16/2017 c9 10DaMastah101
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That's just a section of the current chapter, I think you need to re-upload it...(I was able to copy and paste that using my phone).
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That's just a section of the current chapter, I think you need to re-upload it...(I was able to copy and paste that using my phone).
7/9/2017 c8 DaMastah101
It's my first review here but I've been checking this for updates alot.
Makoto and Ibuki are getting along which is nice~
I did NOT expect Karin to show up lmao! Even though Karin's my favorite SF girl I'm glad Makoto stood up to her haughtiness :3
It's my first review here but I've been checking this for updates alot.
Makoto and Ibuki are getting along which is nice~
I did NOT expect Karin to show up lmao! Even though Karin's my favorite SF girl I'm glad Makoto stood up to her haughtiness :3
6/25/2017 c1 Guest
Cool chapter did not expect Karin to show on the cool but that left me a question
If the sickness did not spread then was the glade being targeted by somebody?
P.s nice fight and the girl are getting lots of money.
would Sakura or Elena show up too
Cool chapter did not expect Karin to show on the cool but that left me a question
If the sickness did not spread then was the glade being targeted by somebody?
P.s nice fight and the girl are getting lots of money.
would Sakura or Elena show up too
2/25/2017 c6 Guest
This is pretty good, nowadays it's usually hard to find fanfiction that it's not completely out of character, so it's great to see one that on top of that is well researched and well written.
Keep the good work, Ibuki and Makoto are just too goddamn cute.
This is pretty good, nowadays it's usually hard to find fanfiction that it's not completely out of character, so it's great to see one that on top of that is well researched and well written.
Keep the good work, Ibuki and Makoto are just too goddamn cute.
12/13/2016 c1 Guest
Good chapter so makoto and ibuki are finally making up that good.i starting to get the feeling ibuki is going to convince makoto to help her. Feel sorry for the village i wonder what the sickness is?
P.s ibuki falling for makato big time
P.p.s good luck at the story's chapters!
Good chapter so makoto and ibuki are finally making up that good.i starting to get the feeling ibuki is going to convince makoto to help her. Feel sorry for the village i wonder what the sickness is?
P.s ibuki falling for makato big time
P.p.s good luck at the story's chapters!
9/24/2016 c5 Guset
So ibuki Lost her home ouch.i real any Dont blame markto for the atempered murder but still there going have to eren eachother trust if they Dont kill each other in the procces. Wonder what ibuki villages will do next .
So ibuki Lost her home ouch.i real any Dont blame markto for the atempered murder but still there going have to eren eachother trust if they Dont kill each other in the procces. Wonder what ibuki villages will do next .
8/26/2016 c4 James Birdsong
Cool story
Cool story