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3/31 c10 Dizzy WillBeth
Ewwww!
7/28/2020 c10 Guest
Je viens de finir cette histoire captivante . Je la relirai avec plaisir .mervi
4/29/2020 c10 Guest
ME ENCANTA, ESPERO QUE TENGA UN FINAL FELIZ
4/28/2020 c10 Guest
MUY BONITO
3/17/2020 c10 Guest
Just rewatched season 2 and wow this story was great! I totally agree - Demelza deserved a little better from Ross after what happened.
2/29/2020 c10 4Classic-Color
This was a beautiful beautiful story!
Adultery is non-turning point in a relationship but it doesn't have to be the end of it.
You did an amazing job portraying the ups and downs of trying to make is through all while staying true to the characters.
Also, you have a very pleasant and fluent style of writing!
This truly deserves more reviews!
9/26/2019 c10 Bonnie
Thank you for this wonderful alternate story! You did a fantastic job! I believe that the words you wrote were true to the nature of the characters. I enjoyed Demelza standing up for herself and, as a consequence, Ross having to really realize just how special his wife is and how much he nearly destroyed by his behavior.
8/26/2019 c10 Tessie7
Hi! Thank you for this lovely story you've written.

I really enjoyed it and as far as plot is concerned, it was perfect. I know English is not your first language (it isn't mine either) and unfortunatelly it showed...

There were many mistakes in spelling, pronouns and even prepositions throughout the whole story. I am not trying to discourage you from writing in English because despite those mistakes, there were other parts where your use of the language was great! It didn't really make sense to me how you're able to write such a flowery and basically flawless description of something and then misspell a simple everyday word. In my humble opinion, if you could get someone to beta-read your stories and correct your grammar and spelling, they would be near perfection.

To end on a better note, I finished your story, despite the fact I tend to abandon stories with bad grammar almost imidiately. Yours however, was very captivating and I read it for the plot. I love how you captured marriage as something that requires a lot of work and isn't easy. And they overcame everyting in the end :)

Even though Elizabeth's baby being Ross' must've been another low blow for Demelza and I'm not sure I would be able to put it behind me as soon as she did.

Thanks again for a great story, I hope I wasn't too harsh on you. Keep writing :)
Tessie
4/2/2019 c10 katya.pietrini
Una bellissima ff... Hai realizzato quello che avrei voluto vedere anche sullo schermo e nei libri... Che Demelza dopo la notte di trenwith lasciasse Ross... Non per sempre ma quel tanto che bastava per fargli temere di perderla per sempre e capire quanto fosse importante, indispensabile per lui. Mi รจ piaciuto molto anche vederlo rosicare per la gelosia! Bellissimo l'ultimo capitolo.. Anche se con qualche malinconia... Bravissima!
6/26/2018 c10 Kittyrocket
Oooh "he looks like you" right on the feels!
Honestly, I would have slapped him again, but I get they're moving on.
Beautiful story! Are you watching the new season?
Thank you so much for this, it's always been on my mind the "what if she actually left?"
6/8/2018 c10 32Mistress 0f Dragons
I'm sad to see this story end but all good things must come to a close. Wonderful job with this story.
6/7/2018 c9 Mistress 0f Dragons
Yeeeeessssss! This chapter was so satisfying. I hope they do something like this in season 4.
6/7/2018 c8 Mistress 0f Dragons
The Christmas Eve chapter and this one are my favorite so far. To me I always did like it when the male was injured and the female took care of her loved one. Scratch like, I love it.
6/7/2018 c7 Mistress 0f Dragons
Yeeeeeessss! Finally! She's on her way to forgive him. At least I assume that because she invited him to say for breakfast.
6/7/2018 c6 Mistress 0f Dragons
Found a small typo "his uncle" should be "her uncle."

*gives a round of applause* I think you captured Verity's character spot on with that letter.
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